for Goodbye7/7/2004 c1 Ailis
This poem is good. It is strong and decisive. Good job. One thing that gets a little awkward is the way you kind of forced the poem into that kind of shape. Just a little, though. I like it.
This poem is good. It is strong and decisive. Good job. One thing that gets a little awkward is the way you kind of forced the poem into that kind of shape. Just a little, though. I like it.