for eight ways to see the sand9/4/2004 c1 
32pointythings
This is cool, but maybe for your assignment it would have worked better to just start every verse with the same phrase and have that phrase contain the word sand. This way it just sounds like you're saying the word sand too much.
32pointythingsThis is cool, but maybe for your assignment it would have worked better to just start every verse with the same phrase and have that phrase contain the word sand. This way it just sounds like you're saying the word sand too much.
7/9/2004 c1 Jen
It was ok for sand as the topic. You have better writings that you don't have posted. Then again thats my opinion. TTFN.
It was ok for sand as the topic. You have better writings that you don't have posted. Then again thats my opinion. TTFN.