for Down in the Valley8/27/2004 c1 
14Black-raindb0w
aw thats so sad. but good. once again, you haven't failed to impress. it is depressing as HELL but unfortunately, some ppl actually do live this kind of life. I have a friend who got pregnant but i dont stay in touch with her anymore. she is my age, only 16, and either already had the baby or will be having it very soon.
14Black-raindb0waw thats so sad. but good. once again, you haven't failed to impress. it is depressing as HELL but unfortunately, some ppl actually do live this kind of life. I have a friend who got pregnant but i dont stay in touch with her anymore. she is my age, only 16, and either already had the baby or will be having it very soon.
8/22/2004 c1 113fRoZeN tIgEr TeArS
ooh! that is so good! I think you should consider writing more. I wanna know what happens to Darren, and all that other good stuff.
alrighty...thanks for the reviews, and if you get the chance, check out some of my other stuff.
113fRoZeN tIgEr TeArSooh! that is so good! I think you should consider writing more. I wanna know what happens to Darren, and all that other good stuff.
alrighty...thanks for the reviews, and if you get the chance, check out some of my other stuff.
7/24/2004 c1 7Tainted Tears
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How tragic. This was sincerely tragic, though written very well. A very heavy subject and you carried it out very well. If this was a true story, like the exact thing happened to a particular mother, my heart would soar for the baby. GOOD JOB!
- Tainted Tears
7Tainted TearsRemember me? ^_^
How tragic. This was sincerely tragic, though written very well. A very heavy subject and you carried it out very well. If this was a true story, like the exact thing happened to a particular mother, my heart would soar for the baby. GOOD JOB!
- Tainted Tears