
3/6/2005 c6
18Petey Green Moss
I love this story...it's soo sad, and ironic. You mixed up a few of your words here and there but other than that, this story was fantastic, keep writing.

I love this story...it's soo sad, and ironic. You mixed up a few of your words here and there but other than that, this story was fantastic, keep writing.
12/5/2004 c6
5Augustemerald813
Wow-this is a great story! The chapters are a little short, but that's okay. Aw, I'm hoping they both find out they like each other! But in your profile thing it said you like writing sad stories, so that probably won't happen. Maybe you'll love your characters so much you want them to be happy. :-) Who knows? Update soon!

Wow-this is a great story! The chapters are a little short, but that's okay. Aw, I'm hoping they both find out they like each other! But in your profile thing it said you like writing sad stories, so that probably won't happen. Maybe you'll love your characters so much you want them to be happy. :-) Who knows? Update soon!
12/3/2004 c6
2angelbymistake
Ahh! Bad. Bad. Cant you just let him love her? Bad seb. Bad. Bad. Haha. Anyway, keep writing. Aah.. when will he confess? ;p and no, don’t do it too fast. It’ll be boring if its fast. I mean fast as in the confession was quick. :)

Ahh! Bad. Bad. Cant you just let him love her? Bad seb. Bad. Bad. Haha. Anyway, keep writing. Aah.. when will he confess? ;p and no, don’t do it too fast. It’ll be boring if its fast. I mean fast as in the confession was quick. :)
11/29/2004 c6 Erin Bek
Please write more, I'll be waiting (",)
Please write more, I'll be waiting (",)
11/28/2004 c1
10iheartkellan
I can one of your questions; she said no cause she was scared. I am writing ch 2 now :) It's exciting and that's for the review.

I can one of your questions; she said no cause she was scared. I am writing ch 2 now :) It's exciting and that's for the review.
10/30/2004 c5
2angelbymistake
how can he ask a girl to break up with his girl.. i mean.. how! oh well... i cant wait for the next chapter.. and i like the way they were sitting together.. it's like being bestfriends ever since nursery. :)

how can he ask a girl to break up with his girl.. i mean.. how! oh well... i cant wait for the next chapter.. and i like the way they were sitting together.. it's like being bestfriends ever since nursery. :)
8/22/2004 c4
3IknowBacon
Hey! That was amazing! I'm loving this story so much! Can't wait for more!
xoxo-Amber

Hey! That was amazing! I'm loving this story so much! Can't wait for more!
xoxo-Amber
8/16/2004 c1
5Menebar
Wow, kewll story, the summary was great, made me wanna read the story (lol). thx for your review and sry for the short chappies. =) thx again.

Wow, kewll story, the summary was great, made me wanna read the story (lol). thx for your review and sry for the short chappies. =) thx again.
8/14/2004 c3 10261106949281
alison you are a hot bitch!...anyhow i wuv this story so far ;) hurry up and finito it!1
*mwahs=z* twes
alison you are a hot bitch!...anyhow i wuv this story so far ;) hurry up and finito it!1
*mwahs=z* twes