for Postwar Antihero8/10/2004 c1 
1M62
Haha, you spin an entertaining tale rife with dark humor from the opening scenes of a beggar willing to degrade himself for food to a mad man on a rampage searching for his bike. You do a great job illustrating a post appopcolytpic setting that reminds me of Fallout or the Postman, and the narration from a paranoid nutter is excellent. The only thing is that the paragraph spacing is a bit questionable. Some legnthy sections could be broken up.
Great stuff. I'll be sure to check out the rest later on.
1M62Haha, you spin an entertaining tale rife with dark humor from the opening scenes of a beggar willing to degrade himself for food to a mad man on a rampage searching for his bike. You do a great job illustrating a post appopcolytpic setting that reminds me of Fallout or the Postman, and the narration from a paranoid nutter is excellent. The only thing is that the paragraph spacing is a bit questionable. Some legnthy sections could be broken up.
Great stuff. I'll be sure to check out the rest later on.
8/7/2004 c12 Sameth Parshath
XD That's hilarious, I can see where it came from, either from Inuyasha the anime or from personal experience. lol Nice job dude, keep up the good work, i'll tell people about your story, it's excellent XD
XD That's hilarious, I can see where it came from, either from Inuyasha the anime or from personal experience. lol Nice job dude, keep up the good work, i'll tell people about your story, it's excellent XD
8/5/2004 c11 Sameth Parshath
Wow... Amazing dude, I am... Stunned... At how good this is, the grammer and such needs a tad bit of work, but holy shit... I'm proud of how this story came out for you. And I hope your new chapters come soon, because I find this story absolutely amazing. Very unqie, and it really just sucks you in, I couldn't tear my eyes away from the screen why reading this and had to order pizza straight through my bedroom window because I wanted ot get back to this story so badly. Excellent job, I hope you e-mail me telling me when the next chapter comes. ^_^ (title the PM Chapter Update or osmething so I knwo it's really you.
Wow... Amazing dude, I am... Stunned... At how good this is, the grammer and such needs a tad bit of work, but holy shit... I'm proud of how this story came out for you. And I hope your new chapters come soon, because I find this story absolutely amazing. Very unqie, and it really just sucks you in, I couldn't tear my eyes away from the screen why reading this and had to order pizza straight through my bedroom window because I wanted ot get back to this story so badly. Excellent job, I hope you e-mail me telling me when the next chapter comes. ^_^ (title the PM Chapter Update or osmething so I knwo it's really you.