7/7/2006 c23 grumpirah
o my damn, you can't really stop there can you?

12/30/2004 c23 4Cormamin
Hm. I'm not very good at reviewing, partly because people think I'm too critical, but I'd like to tell you that this is very good. I wondered if maybe you studied arial flight, or astronomy, or something like that. Out of all these, I'd have to say that I like Chapter 19 the best. The way Michael feels is very well described. I can actually say it's perfect, because I've felt exactly the way he does at one time in my life. But overall, very well done.

P.S.-Thanks again for reviewing.-Celeste (Isn't that funny, my name too.)

7/17/2004 c1 Gaelfling
Hm...looks pretty interesting. I'll be reading the rest.

7/15/2004 c9 AlienCultist
great chapter...
i think evil came first... because if everyone is uniform someone will have to take the step back to evil, which will then motivate someone to step forward and combat him... a good person would not motivate someone to be bad most of the time too...
and i want to see you pronounce that captain mans full name...