for Forgotten12/30/2004 c1 
7Darkspiritchild
I love your poems. This one is just another example of your amazing talent.
7DarkspiritchildI love your poems. This one is just another example of your amazing talent.
7/10/2004 c1 13Junbing
pure anger :) but learn to forgive and forget..since it's someone important to you. Sometimes, sitting down together and talk and control will helps ! :)
13Junbingpure anger :) but learn to forgive and forget..since it's someone important to you. Sometimes, sitting down together and talk and control will helps ! :)
7/9/2004 c1 19Vampiric Huntess
Interesting write, I enjoyed reading it. ^_^ I liked the way it flowed nicely, yet still free of form. Try adding more or working with it a little, and it might make good lyrics too. Just sounds like it to me. Good job on this one.
19Vampiric HuntessInteresting write, I enjoyed reading it. ^_^ I liked the way it flowed nicely, yet still free of form. Try adding more or working with it a little, and it might make good lyrics too. Just sounds like it to me. Good job on this one.