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8/24/2005 c12 
1Lady-Hitokiri
Hah! So the haenrei were good after all. I'm glad that everything's explained. So they used a levitator...and she knows who hired her. But you still sort of left it open, because we don't know about her double. Wow...that was great though. *claps*
I can't believe I'm done with this story. It was a pleasure reading it. :) I love your writing style and even though I would've liked a little more description and detail, overall it is very well done. I might read another one of your stories...Nuroch Thawned or something like that. I'll give that one a try later. (sorry, you're swamped with all my reviews in your e-mail!)
1Lady-HitokiriHah! So the haenrei were good after all. I'm glad that everything's explained. So they used a levitator...and she knows who hired her. But you still sort of left it open, because we don't know about her double. Wow...that was great though. *claps*
I can't believe I'm done with this story. It was a pleasure reading it. :) I love your writing style and even though I would've liked a little more description and detail, overall it is very well done. I might read another one of your stories...Nuroch Thawned or something like that. I'll give that one a try later. (sorry, you're swamped with all my reviews in your e-mail!)
8/24/2005 c11 Lady-Hitokiri
Hmm...a Kate look-alike -a spy...I never would have guessed that.Well, at least she tried to get away, but it didn't seem to work. At least the missing people are alive, but now Kate is in a lot of trouble. Man, I'm so anxious to read on. I'll keep this review short and sweet.
Hmm...a Kate look-alike -a spy...I never would have guessed that.Well, at least she tried to get away, but it didn't seem to work. At least the missing people are alive, but now Kate is in a lot of trouble. Man, I'm so anxious to read on. I'll keep this review short and sweet.
8/24/2005 c10 Lady-Hitokiri
Yeah, I decided that since there's only two more chapters after this, I might as well finish it up. :)
That was a pretty strange dream Kate had. I've had some weird dreams, but none quite like that! But maybe it means something... Kate said that dreams are annoying, but maybe it could help her in one way or another.
Oh boy...she followed that guys order to put on a disguise, but now she just got caught! This doesn't seem good for Kate at all. I hope she'll be okay.*rushes to read next chapter*
Yeah, I decided that since there's only two more chapters after this, I might as well finish it up. :)
That was a pretty strange dream Kate had. I've had some weird dreams, but none quite like that! But maybe it means something... Kate said that dreams are annoying, but maybe it could help her in one way or another.
Oh boy...she followed that guys order to put on a disguise, but now she just got caught! This doesn't seem good for Kate at all. I hope she'll be okay.*rushes to read next chapter*
8/24/2005 c9 Lady-Hitokiri
Both the Monitors and the haelrei seem like an interesting bunch. That'd be pretty scary if someone was twice or even three times as tall as I am!
But why are they forcing her to go there just because they want to help. I don't know, it just seems a little suspicious to me.
I liked the restaurant scene a lot. It captured my attention really well at that part. I think that either someone is stealing them from there or from the labs. Although I don't know for sure.
Gosh, I'm excited to read more. I think I'll try to maybe even finish the story today if I can. I'm not exactly sure how much other free time I have. But anyway, sorry for my rambling. Sometimes I just talk about unnecessary things. :P
Both the Monitors and the haelrei seem like an interesting bunch. That'd be pretty scary if someone was twice or even three times as tall as I am!
But why are they forcing her to go there just because they want to help. I don't know, it just seems a little suspicious to me.
I liked the restaurant scene a lot. It captured my attention really well at that part. I think that either someone is stealing them from there or from the labs. Although I don't know for sure.
Gosh, I'm excited to read more. I think I'll try to maybe even finish the story today if I can. I'm not exactly sure how much other free time I have. But anyway, sorry for my rambling. Sometimes I just talk about unnecessary things. :P
8/24/2005 c8 Lady-Hitokiri
I have more time than I thought I did. (today, my classes start later than the other days of the week) So I have some extra time to R&R.
I enjoyed reading the description of the room. It gave me a nice visual so I could kind of imagine what it looked like.
I'm sure it has to be someone out for revenge, otherwise, I can't tell what other motive anyone would have for killing those people. I wonder what that guy, who's with the Monitors, wants.
I like how you have the different races, like the african with the cyan marks. That's pretty cool. Well, I'll probably go ahead and read the next chapter while I'm at it. .
I have more time than I thought I did. (today, my classes start later than the other days of the week) So I have some extra time to R&R.
I enjoyed reading the description of the room. It gave me a nice visual so I could kind of imagine what it looked like.
I'm sure it has to be someone out for revenge, otherwise, I can't tell what other motive anyone would have for killing those people. I wonder what that guy, who's with the Monitors, wants.
I like how you have the different races, like the african with the cyan marks. That's pretty cool. Well, I'll probably go ahead and read the next chapter while I'm at it. .
8/24/2005 c7 Lady-Hitokiri
Wow, this mystery is getting better. It seems to me like she did die of the poison, only after the person drove through the sand, since she wasn't dirty. But it doesn't explain the footprints only leading the the body, and not leading away from it.
But yes, this is getting very interesting. So far, when Kate finds something out, it seems like more and more questions arise in its place. It's good because it helps me to think as well and try to figure out what's going on.
I'm really surprised that you don't have more reviewers. This story is really good. I can't wait to see how your new story turns out also, when you finish it. :)
Wow, this mystery is getting better. It seems to me like she did die of the poison, only after the person drove through the sand, since she wasn't dirty. But it doesn't explain the footprints only leading the the body, and not leading away from it.
But yes, this is getting very interesting. So far, when Kate finds something out, it seems like more and more questions arise in its place. It's good because it helps me to think as well and try to figure out what's going on.
I'm really surprised that you don't have more reviewers. This story is really good. I can't wait to see how your new story turns out also, when you finish it. :)
8/23/2005 c6 Lady-Hitokiri
I know, I know, I'm bad. It's been almost a month since I reviewed for this story, which is a little hard for me to believe. But I'm going to try to finish it really soon. I've been procrastinating a bit, but I really want to finish this story because it's so good. :P But I do apologize for taking this long.
As for this chapter, I felt that it went smoothly. I think it needed a few more details/desription, but I still liked it. I'm glad that I've finally figured out who that stalker guy is. I think it's suspicious that Ivan was missing while Wellman was found dead. That makes him a suspect on my list, although it could just be a red herring.
I'll have to read more tomorrow, since it's late and I'd like to go to bed. Again, sorry for my hiatus in reading this story. I'll be sure to read more chapters soon! ^^;
I know, I know, I'm bad. It's been almost a month since I reviewed for this story, which is a little hard for me to believe. But I'm going to try to finish it really soon. I've been procrastinating a bit, but I really want to finish this story because it's so good. :P But I do apologize for taking this long.
As for this chapter, I felt that it went smoothly. I think it needed a few more details/desription, but I still liked it. I'm glad that I've finally figured out who that stalker guy is. I think it's suspicious that Ivan was missing while Wellman was found dead. That makes him a suspect on my list, although it could just be a red herring.
I'll have to read more tomorrow, since it's late and I'd like to go to bed. Again, sorry for my hiatus in reading this story. I'll be sure to read more chapters soon! ^^;
7/27/2005 c5 Lady-Hitokiri
I still can't believe you don't have many reviews for this story. It's really great and people are missing out. Compulsion and your other stories (which I have yet to read...) deserve more too. I came to the conclusion long ago that most people on fictionpress prefer to write their own stories instead of reading others. *shrugs* But hey, what can anyone do about it?
Anywoo...back to the story. Yes, so as I was saying, this is getting better and better. I love the whole concept of the Generations and living in space, as I said before. I'm beginning to understand it more and more as I go along.
Hmm. It seems like maybe Orange does play a role in this, maybe due to the fact that they said he was working harder and pushing everyone over the edge. Maybe that has something to do with it.
Again, this chapter was great. I'll be sure to read more soon.
Oh, yeah, and Vykal's not supposed to be wearing jeans. :P They're just supposed to be dark pants. But uh, yeah, those are their more casual clothes anyway, but the artist seemed to make Vykal and Shobai look like they have jeans. XP Ah, well. But it at least gives you a rough outline of how they should look like.I'll do more response to your reviews in the author's note of the next chapter, which I'm slowly progressing on. It should be out in a few days, depending on the free time I have.
By the way, how's that new story that you were working on coming along? ;)
I still can't believe you don't have many reviews for this story. It's really great and people are missing out. Compulsion and your other stories (which I have yet to read...) deserve more too. I came to the conclusion long ago that most people on fictionpress prefer to write their own stories instead of reading others. *shrugs* But hey, what can anyone do about it?
Anywoo...back to the story. Yes, so as I was saying, this is getting better and better. I love the whole concept of the Generations and living in space, as I said before. I'm beginning to understand it more and more as I go along.
Hmm. It seems like maybe Orange does play a role in this, maybe due to the fact that they said he was working harder and pushing everyone over the edge. Maybe that has something to do with it.
Again, this chapter was great. I'll be sure to read more soon.
Oh, yeah, and Vykal's not supposed to be wearing jeans. :P They're just supposed to be dark pants. But uh, yeah, those are their more casual clothes anyway, but the artist seemed to make Vykal and Shobai look like they have jeans. XP Ah, well. But it at least gives you a rough outline of how they should look like.I'll do more response to your reviews in the author's note of the next chapter, which I'm slowly progressing on. It should be out in a few days, depending on the free time I have.
By the way, how's that new story that you were working on coming along? ;)
7/24/2005 c4 Lady-Hitokiri
Ah, blue hair. Reminds me of the royal family in Ebbarria. :PIt's interesting that the journalist could be a spy. That is a good possibility, and smart of Kate to be careful.Hm...maybe that guy with the painting has something to do with this whole thing.Again, an overall great chapter. The mystery and interest it still kept. :)
Well, I hope everything's okay. Until next time...
Ah, blue hair. Reminds me of the royal family in Ebbarria. :PIt's interesting that the journalist could be a spy. That is a good possibility, and smart of Kate to be careful.Hm...maybe that guy with the painting has something to do with this whole thing.Again, an overall great chapter. The mystery and interest it still kept. :)
Well, I hope everything's okay. Until next time...
7/18/2005 c3 Lady-Hitokiri
Woo...I was getting behind in reading this. I said I'd keep a good pace, but that's a little too slow for me.Well, I liked this chapter, and other than a few typing/spelling errors, everything seemed fine.I'm sure that the mysterious man has something to do with this whole mystery, but I'm not completely sure. I wonder why the disappearances have been occuring too. Maybe someone wants to kidnap the doctors and professors for some reason?Ah well. I'm not very good with solving mysteries. I'll just have to wait and see how everything unfolds. Good work and I can't wait to read more.
Woo...I was getting behind in reading this. I said I'd keep a good pace, but that's a little too slow for me.Well, I liked this chapter, and other than a few typing/spelling errors, everything seemed fine.I'm sure that the mysterious man has something to do with this whole mystery, but I'm not completely sure. I wonder why the disappearances have been occuring too. Maybe someone wants to kidnap the doctors and professors for some reason?Ah well. I'm not very good with solving mysteries. I'll just have to wait and see how everything unfolds. Good work and I can't wait to read more.
7/6/2005 c2 Lady-Hitokiri
Ooh -nice ending to this chapter. I wonder who that mysterious follower is...
You've done a fine job of already bringing me into the case and throwing some questions at me. Everything went well this chapter, except the phrase "We've arranged for" was repeated a bit too much, but other than that it was good.
I can't wait to read more.
Ooh -nice ending to this chapter. I wonder who that mysterious follower is...
You've done a fine job of already bringing me into the case and throwing some questions at me. Everything went well this chapter, except the phrase "We've arranged for" was repeated a bit too much, but other than that it was good.
I can't wait to read more.
6/28/2005 c1 Lady-Hitokiri
You have a pretty good set up for this first chapter. The character is introduced well and the plot already starts to set in, but I'd still like a bit of description on what Kate looks like, just to help with the visuals. On the other hand, the description of the world and the background information on the inhabitants and the colonization of the planet was well written. So far these seems to be a nice start. I'll be looking forward to reading more (but I'll go my slow pace as usual)
You have a pretty good set up for this first chapter. The character is introduced well and the plot already starts to set in, but I'd still like a bit of description on what Kate looks like, just to help with the visuals. On the other hand, the description of the world and the background information on the inhabitants and the colonization of the planet was well written. So far these seems to be a nice start. I'll be looking forward to reading more (but I'll go my slow pace as usual)
8/13/2004 c2 9Needs Therapy
not bad, not bad at all. can't wait to read more.
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9Needs Therapynot bad, not bad at all. can't wait to read more.
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8/1/2004 c1 Needs Therapy
interesting. little bit of history mixed with sci-fi. nice. real nice. keep it up.
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interesting. little bit of history mixed with sci-fi. nice. real nice. keep it up.
Peace out (The Kett)