for I Am6/24/2007 c1 Pirateslady
I am still shy and scared at my age. I still feel so different from everyone else. This is an ageless poem. Wonderfully expressed.
I am still shy and scared at my age. I still feel so different from everyone else. This is an ageless poem. Wonderfully expressed.
10/29/2004 c1 
94flyinfrogg
wow, i did not know that side of you Ielle. I've never seen this poem either, you should show me more. And tell me what is still the same about you and what's not.
94flyinfroggwow, i did not know that side of you Ielle. I've never seen this poem either, you should show me more. And tell me what is still the same about you and what's not.
7/11/2004 c1 Aaron Portelli
Really absorbing. I've never tried an I Am poem before, but this makes me want to. You're writing is impressive and I look forward to even more! :)
Really absorbing. I've never tried an I Am poem before, but this makes me want to. You're writing is impressive and I look forward to even more! :)
7/10/2004 c1 10deceasedflames
One word: wow. I had to write an 'I am' poem in seventh grade... yours is quite impressive. I can just sense your longing to blend in with the crowd and how you cover up your fear and tranquility with false optimism. Your poem also had a great flow. I really felt a part of the poem as a read it. Excellent.
10deceasedflamesOne word: wow. I had to write an 'I am' poem in seventh grade... yours is quite impressive. I can just sense your longing to blend in with the crowd and how you cover up your fear and tranquility with false optimism. Your poem also had a great flow. I really felt a part of the poem as a read it. Excellent.