for Doctor Barton and the Lady1/18/2005 c1 
13whatdreamsmaycome
I love diving into other worlds, thank you for that.I think that your perspective is a little off...it seems as though you are writing from a 20 perspective when your characters are really from the turn of the century. Your descriptions are detailed, but not lush; does that make sense?This could be the beginning to a fine story, if you would take the next leap of faith and put yourself (the narrator) into the story a little more
13whatdreamsmaycomeI love diving into other worlds, thank you for that.I think that your perspective is a little off...it seems as though you are writing from a 20 perspective when your characters are really from the turn of the century. Your descriptions are detailed, but not lush; does that make sense?This could be the beginning to a fine story, if you would take the next leap of faith and put yourself (the narrator) into the story a little more