for Someone Who Cares6/10/2012 c4 
18Bushwah
This is a great story. I LOVE that you have a gay main character... it's the first fp I've read that does.
You really mean it that you'll give me a review? My story is called Silver Dagger, Iron Ring and it's nasty. Really nasty. Three chapters: the first one a summary of the second and third.
Really inspiring. Your idea of a guy "Cinderella" is really cool. I wonder if Liam will be his "Prince Charming"?
18BushwahThis is a great story. I LOVE that you have a gay main character... it's the first fp I've read that does.
You really mean it that you'll give me a review? My story is called Silver Dagger, Iron Ring and it's nasty. Really nasty. Three chapters: the first one a summary of the second and third.
Really inspiring. Your idea of a guy "Cinderella" is really cool. I wonder if Liam will be his "Prince Charming"?
4/10/2007 c3 5Squirrel Activist
The sun rises in the East.
By the way, you should update, since you haven't in about 2 and a half years.
=p
5Squirrel ActivistThe sun rises in the East.
By the way, you should update, since you haven't in about 2 and a half years.
=p
10/30/2005 c4 16sporkess
Liking the Cinderella remake. Although, it's considered polite to acknowledge the source in the summary - oh, what the hell, I doubt anyone cares. Anyway, it is deserving of an update and a cute, fluffy finish if you ever get around to it. I hope you do, stories abandoned in the middle are truly woeful things.
16sporkessLiking the Cinderella remake. Although, it's considered polite to acknowledge the source in the summary - oh, what the hell, I doubt anyone cares. Anyway, it is deserving of an update and a cute, fluffy finish if you ever get around to it. I hope you do, stories abandoned in the middle are truly woeful things.
10/18/2004 c4 1Safety Canary
HEY YOU UPDATED YES!
I don't check this site very often anymore, but I jumped when I saw you'd finally updated. It made me VERY happy. The chapter was great, though the Liam being future figure of bliss for Rob was too predictable. Much backstory, intro to Kyle, Morgan's parents, and less Dad and twins. My kind of chapter! UPDATE OH PLEASE. I will go crazy, I swear, I mean it.
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1Safety CanaryHEY YOU UPDATED YES!
I don't check this site very often anymore, but I jumped when I saw you'd finally updated. It made me VERY happy. The chapter was great, though the Liam being future figure of bliss for Rob was too predictable. Much backstory, intro to Kyle, Morgan's parents, and less Dad and twins. My kind of chapter! UPDATE OH PLEASE. I will go crazy, I swear, I mean it.
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8/18/2004 c3 Steph
This story is actually really well written, you have a great grasp of the typical teenage mind ( of course I'm a little biased being one of your best friends ) Your language is the norm for most teenagers. And considering you are female you have, I think, accurately portrayed the inner workings of the average male mind. This a great story There are few flaws that I can possibly see other that the rare either spelling or grammatical error and mere technicalities, to answer your question the sun rises in the East. I find it inpiring to authors and people alike that a girl no differentfrom many others is capable of being in a friendship with not only someone of the opposite gender but also someone who does not share their views on sexuality. because as you have seen from both of our forays into a GSA this doesn't always occur
Keep writng and continue on this story its great!
This story is actually really well written, you have a great grasp of the typical teenage mind ( of course I'm a little biased being one of your best friends ) Your language is the norm for most teenagers. And considering you are female you have, I think, accurately portrayed the inner workings of the average male mind. This a great story There are few flaws that I can possibly see other that the rare either spelling or grammatical error and mere technicalities, to answer your question the sun rises in the East. I find it inpiring to authors and people alike that a girl no differentfrom many others is capable of being in a friendship with not only someone of the opposite gender but also someone who does not share their views on sexuality. because as you have seen from both of our forays into a GSA this doesn't always occur
Keep writng and continue on this story its great!
7/30/2004 c3 Kate
This is one of your best works yet. The third chapter isn't as good as the others the in-head question and answer thing isn't the best way to do do what i think you were trying to do. i'v done that myself and i'v found that a dream sequence works really well about facing deomons. All in all really good.
This is one of your best works yet. The third chapter isn't as good as the others the in-head question and answer thing isn't the best way to do do what i think you were trying to do. i'v done that myself and i'v found that a dream sequence works really well about facing deomons. All in all really good.
7/24/2004 c3 7Lee Harvey Kennedy
Ah, there we go! Now I know how Robbie is related to Stan & Co. Thanks for clearing that bit up. I'm glad to know there is no blood relation there. And it is the east, you got that correct. Just one little, nearly insignificant spelling mistake I found; ". . .deep-frying the fried". Otherwise, very good. And Robbie's boss? Hoo boy, looks like we've got another jerk on our hands. But you write them well, so I'm looking forward to being pissed off because of him later on, if he plays a role. Pretty good chapter, and I can't wait to see the party mentioned in this chapter. I suppose Liam will be there? Speaking of Liam, he was conspicuously absent this chapter. . . And Stan's absence as well made me think. Affair? Just an idea I thought of.
7Lee Harvey KennedyAh, there we go! Now I know how Robbie is related to Stan & Co. Thanks for clearing that bit up. I'm glad to know there is no blood relation there. And it is the east, you got that correct. Just one little, nearly insignificant spelling mistake I found; ". . .deep-frying the fried". Otherwise, very good. And Robbie's boss? Hoo boy, looks like we've got another jerk on our hands. But you write them well, so I'm looking forward to being pissed off because of him later on, if he plays a role. Pretty good chapter, and I can't wait to see the party mentioned in this chapter. I suppose Liam will be there? Speaking of Liam, he was conspicuously absent this chapter. . . And Stan's absence as well made me think. Affair? Just an idea I thought of.
7/24/2004 c3 1Safety Canary
Ah, yes, of course! I definitely love this story. I'm very glad Stan and the evil twins were absent this chapter. Why does Robbie care about them anyway? Oh, and I asked my parents where the sun rose (I couldn't remember either) and they said east, so I guess I'll believe 'em. Did you say it was east or west that it rose? I can't remember, and I'm too lazy to go check... Oh well. So update soon, person. Or I might have to bug you with more e-mails. ^^ Oh, and also, VERY interested in this college party thing.
... To all the fights I've conquered and behold / The times have changed and I will now move over slowly... ("Sway", Lostprophets)
'Slayer
1Safety CanaryAh, yes, of course! I definitely love this story. I'm very glad Stan and the evil twins were absent this chapter. Why does Robbie care about them anyway? Oh, and I asked my parents where the sun rose (I couldn't remember either) and they said east, so I guess I'll believe 'em. Did you say it was east or west that it rose? I can't remember, and I'm too lazy to go check... Oh well. So update soon, person. Or I might have to bug you with more e-mails. ^^ Oh, and also, VERY interested in this college party thing.
... To all the fights I've conquered and behold / The times have changed and I will now move over slowly... ("Sway", Lostprophets)
'Slayer
7/24/2004 c3 2BuffLie
Nice chapter, nice chapter. Two or three typos here or there you could catch to make it run a little smoother. Other than that... it's spiffy.
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Oh, and... "Marty was one of those fat guys with so much body hair it looked like he was wearing a sweater. Or it made him look like he was the missing link to Darwin’s theory of evolution. To put it bluntly, it was disgusting." - Classic! lol
2BuffLieNice chapter, nice chapter. Two or three typos here or there you could catch to make it run a little smoother. Other than that... it's spiffy.
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Oh, and... "Marty was one of those fat guys with so much body hair it looked like he was wearing a sweater. Or it made him look like he was the missing link to Darwin’s theory of evolution. To put it bluntly, it was disgusting." - Classic! lol
7/22/2004 c2 NatalieJ
Wow. I'm 5'3 and about 112 and I'm a friggin stick. OR rather I still am. I haven't relapsed which is good. Didn't get as bad as hospital for me though.
Damn, off topic again. Right. I've just finished reading 'Harry's Hero', and faced with nine other ff.net stories and this, I decided this was a good place to start.
I love your writing style. You keep a good balance between speech and description and use just the right amount of words to get the point across without seeming scarce or long-winded. Well done. Please write more soon.
Wow. I'm 5'3 and about 112 and I'm a friggin stick. OR rather I still am. I haven't relapsed which is good. Didn't get as bad as hospital for me though.
Damn, off topic again. Right. I've just finished reading 'Harry's Hero', and faced with nine other ff.net stories and this, I decided this was a good place to start.
I love your writing style. You keep a good balance between speech and description and use just the right amount of words to get the point across without seeming scarce or long-winded. Well done. Please write more soon.
7/19/2004 c2 BuffLie
This review will be useless. But... I like this :) Keep updating and I'll keep reading.
This review will be useless. But... I like this :) Keep updating and I'll keep reading.
7/15/2004 c2 Sera
Yes, I hat the family too. Particularly the twins. I still don't see why he doesn't tell hus mum though, I would.
Yes, I hat the family too. Particularly the twins. I still don't see why he doesn't tell hus mum though, I would.