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4/9/2005 c1 194Aslan Israel
I like the use of 'hello' and 'goodbye' in all the different languages. Very creative. It's a nice, positive outlook on leaving school. good job.
3/30/2005 c1 187THROUGHTHESEEYES
Wonderful. I hope people take this to heart!
1/1/2005 c1 Hail the Warrior
Wow, that made me snort. But, it's amusing, and yes, we need to say hi to school, but, why does it have to be so boring? And, what if we don't care about the weight-mass ratio of light photons? *snickers*

7/24/2004 c1 Verne
your poem has good ideas behind it. but i still have a few disagreements.
1. True as it may be ("you will have the job you want"), at some point in your life, you will have to eventually say goodbye to school just to succeed at your job.
2. Even the people who stay in school don't necessarily wish it would last forever. They just realize that they have to finish school to be in league to get a job.
3. ciao means hello? lol...i've been using ciao to say goodbye on msn for the past 4 years...lol
anyways yeah...great use of language. other than the things I said above, it was a good poem with great structure and language. Keep writing! ;)
7/23/2004 c1 6deadkitty1
i love how u used different languages that mean the same thing!

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