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8/28/2004 c1 37DarkFairie.RogueSpirit
I like this IT is very good I liked the meening you put behind the lines
Well written
Dark Fairie
7/18/2004 c1 underjoyed
This is actually really well written. Although, apparently I can't read or understand things, so...y'know. Incidentally, the person who I reviewed when my review apparently disturbed you (yeah, sorry, that sentence was incredibly bad grammar. Excuse that) reviewed me back basically telling me how I felt. If her poem wasn't pushing something on me, THAT was.
Anyway, I'm sorry, a review on your work is not the place to be telling you this (even though that's how I came to find you). This is beautifully written, and to be honest, I wasn't expecting it to be so. Gorgeous.
7/17/2004 c1 25esperanzamor
I liked the rhyming - yes, it didn't seem forced - and it flowed with the poem, adding to it - i like the way you put the words and ideas together - 'tears filled my eyes but my heart danced' and the last two lines.
7/16/2004 c1 Blood Stained Tourniquet
Hey sweetie,
Its great. I only wish I could have been there with you. I Love you.
Jen
7/12/2004 c1 4Alexz Lynn
Wow! Impressive stuff - and the rhyming didn't seem forced, like in some work you read. Good job! ~Alexz Lynn

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