for Why Not Knowing Can Kill You7/14/2004 c1 
11SylvarThorne
I really like the premise to this story, but I think it would be greatly improved if you were to write it in such a way so that the reader thinks the "dead" person is attending a funeral, rather than the subject of one.
Out of curiosity, did you know that there was such a fear of being buried alive in the 18th and 19th centuries that "safety coffins" were invented, which were designed to alert gravekeepers if someone had been buried alive?
11SylvarThorneI really like the premise to this story, but I think it would be greatly improved if you were to write it in such a way so that the reader thinks the "dead" person is attending a funeral, rather than the subject of one.
Out of curiosity, did you know that there was such a fear of being buried alive in the 18th and 19th centuries that "safety coffins" were invented, which were designed to alert gravekeepers if someone had been buried alive?