for La Tristesse7/17/2004 c2 
21WiredCrazyFrances
Great Chapter...i can't wait to see where the story is going...it sounds very interesting, keep it up!
21WiredCrazyFrancesGreat Chapter...i can't wait to see where the story is going...it sounds very interesting, keep it up!
7/12/2004 c1 WiredCrazyFrances
Interesting story...sounds like it will be a great story! Only one thing you might want to change is clarify the speaker a bit more when you have long strings of dialogue, it makes things less confusing...other than that keep it up!
Interesting story...sounds like it will be a great story! Only one thing you might want to change is clarify the speaker a bit more when you have long strings of dialogue, it makes things less confusing...other than that keep it up!
7/12/2004 c1 31Cindy Moon
I love you! Nothing is more beautiful than a story about music. I've been waiting for this to be posted since you first told me about it. Feel in love with it right then.
(Trouble with the first sentence, make it more poignant by taking out "the" before angel's tears. Sorry, that irked me.)
=] First impressions, I love Anna already. Interesting touch with the twin, I can already see the possible twists. (x.x I can't believe you used Brianne. -scowls-) Oh hey, did you know that Cecilia is the patron saint of music?
Haha, instant noodles! ^^
And as a note watch out for possible unintentionl play on words, or maybe it was intentional if it was then I've got to hand it to you. Subtle hinting there ^_~
To conclude,I'm completely in love with this story, despite the shoujo-ness that is inevitable. Practically perfection.
-Cindy Moon *)
31Cindy MoonI love you! Nothing is more beautiful than a story about music. I've been waiting for this to be posted since you first told me about it. Feel in love with it right then.
(Trouble with the first sentence, make it more poignant by taking out "the" before angel's tears. Sorry, that irked me.)
=] First impressions, I love Anna already. Interesting touch with the twin, I can already see the possible twists. (x.x I can't believe you used Brianne. -scowls-) Oh hey, did you know that Cecilia is the patron saint of music?
Haha, instant noodles! ^^
And as a note watch out for possible unintentionl play on words, or maybe it was intentional if it was then I've got to hand it to you. Subtle hinting there ^_~
To conclude,I'm completely in love with this story, despite the shoujo-ness that is inevitable. Practically perfection.
-Cindy Moon *)