
8/17/2004 c1
29Livi Z
Wow, what can I say about this? Lets see...Its short, sweet, and to the point, with a deeper meaning behind it...or its the suger going to me head. Anywho, good job!

Wow, what can I say about this? Lets see...Its short, sweet, and to the point, with a deeper meaning behind it...or its the suger going to me head. Anywho, good job!
7/30/2004 c1
5Bleedingtree
I like it tons. the idea has been used before but i don't know you present it differently, you know? you make the idea seem fresh and new..
Good job
~kim

I like it tons. the idea has been used before but i don't know you present it differently, you know? you make the idea seem fresh and new..
Good job
~kim
7/28/2004 c1
81daphnegray78
Wow. I really like the way you went from a hopeful tone in the beginning to a cynical one in the end. Awesome, awesome work.
~Daphne~

Wow. I really like the way you went from a hopeful tone in the beginning to a cynical one in the end. Awesome, awesome work.
~Daphne~
7/12/2004 c1
10Rebecca Kelsey
Reminds me of people. We are born 'free' but then with all the pressures of life we become inslaved with ideas and dreams. Great poem.

Reminds me of people. We are born 'free' but then with all the pressures of life we become inslaved with ideas and dreams. Great poem.