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8/13/2004 c1 117CovinS
This poem seems to be a subliminal reference to the song "Weak and Powerless" by the band A Perfect Circle. I read that you're into retro rock, not progressive, so i'm not sure if you've heard of them. Some of the same lines from the song, especially towards your conclusion. No, not accusing you of copying; just saying that the concept of this poem is widely known, and the emo's expressed are common. The poem tells a chapter of everybody's life, so to speak, and that's good.
7/30/2004 c1 40singingspeechless
know exactly how this feels. good poem. simple but strong.
7/12/2004 c1 12Triquetra22
I know exactly what you mean.
7/12/2004 c1 24staras
i like how you wrote this. at the beginning it seemed a bit choppy, but it started to flow. good job

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