for Angel Eyes8/23/2004 c1 
32SarahB0123
aw.. that was cute but sad. It remind me of my poem where did we go wrong! I loved it! I liked you brought back the angel eyes but angel lies it was like a song and a poem mixed I loved it so much keep it up!
32SarahB0123aw.. that was cute but sad. It remind me of my poem where did we go wrong! I loved it! I liked you brought back the angel eyes but angel lies it was like a song and a poem mixed I loved it so much keep it up!
7/20/2004 c1 18Life on Marz
I like this, it's very ...full of passion and emotion. I like! And thanks for reading my poem!
18Life on MarzI like this, it's very ...full of passion and emotion. I like! And thanks for reading my poem!
7/16/2004 c1 15Robert Emmett Maxwell
I'm not going to lie. I liked it, don't get me wrong, but I think it made the (somewhat, if you wish) subtle statement that all atheists/agnostics are liars or cheats. However, I very well may be too sensitive to the subject, but I can honestly say that I did enjoy the poem, it told the story of this girl well and I could really see it.
Best wishes,
Robert Emmett.
15Robert Emmett MaxwellI'm not going to lie. I liked it, don't get me wrong, but I think it made the (somewhat, if you wish) subtle statement that all atheists/agnostics are liars or cheats. However, I very well may be too sensitive to the subject, but I can honestly say that I did enjoy the poem, it told the story of this girl well and I could really see it.
Best wishes,
Robert Emmett.
7/12/2004 c1 13Eyes Unclouded
You paint a nice portrait of the subject and your feelings come across pretty clearly. Very nice!
13Eyes UncloudedYou paint a nice portrait of the subject and your feelings come across pretty clearly. Very nice!