for Ragnar3/5/2005 c2 
11Erica Beth
I really like this story. You need to write more! It has the potential to be an excellent story and from what I can see you are a wonderful writer...keep up the good work!
~Erica Beth
11Erica BethI really like this story. You need to write more! It has the potential to be an excellent story and from what I can see you are a wonderful writer...keep up the good work!
~Erica Beth
3/5/2005 c1 Erica Beth
hmm intriguing...lol I like that word. Anyway great beginning! I love your writing style! there was only one thing I noticed that bugged me...it wasn't even really a mistake it just kinda sounded odd...when Kyra goes into the tower and calls hello and it said "this time..." and then the next sentence it started with "this time..." again and it was just a bit repetitive. anyway great job! ~Erica Beth
hmm intriguing...lol I like that word. Anyway great beginning! I love your writing style! there was only one thing I noticed that bugged me...it wasn't even really a mistake it just kinda sounded odd...when Kyra goes into the tower and calls hello and it said "this time..." and then the next sentence it started with "this time..." again and it was just a bit repetitive. anyway great job! ~Erica Beth