9/27/2004 c1 23vintage fade
Very. Good. Writing. Aritficial. Refuge. Seriously, it all flowed so well, and the suicide in this is fine with me. Suicide is something... something I don't want to bother discussing because a lot of people don't understand my point. But the story. Man it was amazing. I full enjoyed it.
much love ; vintage fade...
(How do you get the italics in the story?)

8/8/2004 c1 177Chaotic Charisma
WAY to depress me. lol. Blood-stained clothes everywhere? Interesting picture you paint right from the begginning. Very intense story. What a family... it seems exaggerated but as far as the way it works in the story, it doesn't even matter. Love the shattered frame and sanity together. Her every thought... hits hard. Amazing ending. Left me cold.

7/15/2004 c1 6Goldensong
Hey hey. Suicide is good. It was really well written!

7/13/2004 c1 19ColdFrost
This is amazing! You have to write more stories like this.