for Old Broken8/29/2004 c6 
7DaughterOfTheDawn
hey, no problem. I'll just consider this a filler chapter. Lol. Can't wait til the next part comes out. you've really captured the feel of what an abused person would feel like. I've never been abused my self, but some of my friends have, and they talk. Nice job.
7DaughterOfTheDawnhey, no problem. I'll just consider this a filler chapter. Lol. Can't wait til the next part comes out. you've really captured the feel of what an abused person would feel like. I've never been abused my self, but some of my friends have, and they talk. Nice job.
8/2/2004 c5 4Angelic Winter
I wonder if Blake and Kristen are ever gonna see eachother again. Oh well, don't mind me and continue.
4Angelic WinterI wonder if Blake and Kristen are ever gonna see eachother again. Oh well, don't mind me and continue.
8/1/2004 c5 Noel Dreams
So she's deciding to stay in the little town? This was a great chapter just like the others! Poor girl I feel so bad for her. Anyway update soon!
Did you change your name? Maybe I just never noticed it before but it looks different.
So she's deciding to stay in the little town? This was a great chapter just like the others! Poor girl I feel so bad for her. Anyway update soon!
Did you change your name? Maybe I just never noticed it before but it looks different.
7/27/2004 c4 AngryGumballxXx
this story has potential. jeez i sound so formal. but n e wayz, its a good start. and i completely understand everything that kris is going through with blake,since ive been in one of those relationships.
update soon, its a great start!
-samie-
this story has potential. jeez i sound so formal. but n e wayz, its a good start. and i completely understand everything that kris is going through with blake,since ive been in one of those relationships.
update soon, its a great start!
-samie-
7/25/2004 c4 Noel Dreams
That was awesome! This is great! Dreamerland sounds so cute-i wanna live somewhere like that. Anyway i have no idea where this story is going. I mean will she go back or will she stay there and will she find another guy to swoop her off her feet? HM i wanna know whats gonna happen! UPDATE SOON!
That was awesome! This is great! Dreamerland sounds so cute-i wanna live somewhere like that. Anyway i have no idea where this story is going. I mean will she go back or will she stay there and will she find another guy to swoop her off her feet? HM i wanna know whats gonna happen! UPDATE SOON!
7/16/2004 c3 Angelic Winter
Great story. I feel really sorry for Kristen, if I were her I would seriously murder Blake. But don't mind me and continue!
Great story. I feel really sorry for Kristen, if I were her I would seriously murder Blake. But don't mind me and continue!
7/15/2004 c3 Nole Dreams
This is GREAT! Go Kris! At first I din't think she had it in her. You're a great writer. You make it so real-I feel like I'm there or something. Anyway you have to update soon because I love it!
This is GREAT! Go Kris! At first I din't think she had it in her. You're a great writer. You make it so real-I feel like I'm there or something. Anyway you have to update soon because I love it!
7/15/2004 c3 Nole Dreams
This is GREAT! Go Kris! At first I din't think she had it in her. You're a great writer. You make it so real-I feel like I'm there or something. Anyway you have to update soon because I love it!
This is GREAT! Go Kris! At first I din't think she had it in her. You're a great writer. You make it so real-I feel like I'm there or something. Anyway you have to update soon because I love it!
7/14/2004 c2 2I-eat-Paste
This is a great story! You have great detail and it's very believeable. I hope you update soon becuase I want to see what happens. I'm putting you on my favs and thanks for reviewing my story!
2I-eat-PasteThis is a great story! You have great detail and it's very believeable. I hope you update soon becuase I want to see what happens. I'm putting you on my favs and thanks for reviewing my story!