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4/25/2008 c1 lini pie
this was an amazing story..

though it would be cool if you wrote a story exploring shane a little more :)

but overall i LOVED it!

xx
4/12/2008 c26 4pixiedragongirl77
This story is freakin' amazing. Seriously. From the first to the very last word I was spellbound. You deserve every great review you get, and I look forward to going to read the sequal right now.
1/30/2008 c25 redtwilight
this story was very good, and i am glad that i had the chance to read it. Please keep writing! Thanks
1/15/2008 c27 Ravestna
this was really good

x X xRavestnax X x
11/21/2007 c1 1w0ndering-s0ul
Oh my gosh i read all of this in one take..You have such great talent. You made me feel for the main character as if i was experiencing the stuff myself. I found at times I would be on edge wondering what happened..im soo happy they got together they're perfect for each other!

could you do me a favor and read my story

thanks =D
8/2/2007 c26 12StrawberryKisses08
That ending made me tear up ='] Well done!
9/1/2006 c26 Hokielvr88
I just found this story today and I read the whole thing in one sitting. I just want to say that I think you did an excellent job. It was a really great story. I have to admit that I have a thing for Shane and I think it would be awesome if you wrote a story about him. As the story was progressing I actually thought that he and Paris were going to get together but then the whole thing with James happened. Anyways, great story, and seriously consider writing about Shane!
7/27/2006 c26 Kjersti
Beautiful story. I loved it.
7/10/2006 c26 2IsabellaCat
Usually I avoid reading stories involving abuse because they just make me incredibly sad, but somehow I clicked on your story... and I couldn't stop reading. I was crying for so much of it, but other than the occasional tissue break, I couldn't stop. Thank you for such an amazing read... I love how you've developed Kris through the story; I love how Matt is perfect and not at the same time; I love Paris! She is beyond awesome. Mag is awesome too. You've made Blake into such a believably scary person that at times I began to feel like Kris, wondering if Blake was going to show up, wondering what kind of abuse he was capable of. Keep on writing!
6/3/2006 c1 shadowegoddess
i know how that is... only i lost two and maybe now three of my rats.
3/13/2006 c26 7Sonah
Wow. This was a really great story. You managed to create some very real characters for the situation and that made it really easy to read this and just enjoy. Congratulations! Thanks for posting it.
1/25/2006 c26 Alenor
aw that is a brilliant story. i absolutely love the ending! great job ~ luv Alenor.
9/11/2005 c26 lemjo
Sorry for the late review! I can't believe this story is over. I'm going to miss checking for updates. School has started for me as well, the reason for me taking so long to review. This story has been really great, and I enjoyed reading it. And, of course, I loved the happy ending. Kris is pregnant...yeah! I'm by no means a writer myself, but for what it's worth, I thought this story was very well written. I'll definately keep my eyes open for any more stories you post in the future. Good luck with school.
9/4/2005 c26 2katieee
This was a great story! I loved it!

♥K3aly
9/3/2005 c26 WesternChick
this aint fair that is so fuckin mean. your ending it right here! ah not fair not fair not fair!Can we at least have a prequal to everyones lives? or a sequal to matts and khristens? please?
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