for Old Broken8/8/2005 c23 
3The Queen of Squirrels
I have had no time lately, so I read the chapters, love them, have every intention of reviewing, and just when I seem about to get around to it, boom, new update.Not that I'm complaining.I guess, backtrackign a little, that the other spot you 'could' have ended it would have been terrible, because it left the matter with her family completely unresolved and her own future a little iffy. I like everything you did with the family though, especially with Christina and the twin connection. I like how they're so normal for twins; it's not some big overplayed connection, they're just sisters who happened to be twins. I dunno, it just seems very real.Interesting to see Paris' conflict with her friend tied up a bit, and it's late to be introducing new charater but I'm open to it and wouldn't mind meeting Chastity. That's a crossover, isn't it? I haven't read the other story, but it sounds like it. Speaking of new characters, Lydia better be developed a little, maybe the reason Matt likes her other than her being a total bombshell. Unless that's the reason, but that doesn't sound very Matt. Whatever, I'm eager to see how it all unfolds, I don't know how you manage to update so frequently but keep it up~
3The Queen of SquirrelsI have had no time lately, so I read the chapters, love them, have every intention of reviewing, and just when I seem about to get around to it, boom, new update.Not that I'm complaining.I guess, backtrackign a little, that the other spot you 'could' have ended it would have been terrible, because it left the matter with her family completely unresolved and her own future a little iffy. I like everything you did with the family though, especially with Christina and the twin connection. I like how they're so normal for twins; it's not some big overplayed connection, they're just sisters who happened to be twins. I dunno, it just seems very real.Interesting to see Paris' conflict with her friend tied up a bit, and it's late to be introducing new charater but I'm open to it and wouldn't mind meeting Chastity. That's a crossover, isn't it? I haven't read the other story, but it sounds like it. Speaking of new characters, Lydia better be developed a little, maybe the reason Matt likes her other than her being a total bombshell. Unless that's the reason, but that doesn't sound very Matt. Whatever, I'm eager to see how it all unfolds, I don't know how you manage to update so frequently but keep it up~
8/8/2005 c23 2katieee
Wow. Matt picks up all the strays that wander in to that town doesn't he?
♥Katie
2katieeeWow. Matt picks up all the strays that wander in to that town doesn't he?
♥Katie
8/8/2005 c23 10Blackrose4724
I'm so happy you decided to keep writing. And I can't believe that Matt would do that. Than again he thought Kris wasn't coming back, but still that's low...Can't wait to read the next chapter :-)
10Blackrose4724I'm so happy you decided to keep writing. And I can't believe that Matt would do that. Than again he thought Kris wasn't coming back, but still that's low...Can't wait to read the next chapter :-)
8/8/2005 c22 SweetAshley1500
wow! this was amazing! one of the best story's i've read on here! i can't wait till more of your story's come out! mh! i loved it. very exciting, it mixes with all your emotions and i am just speechless...except for how good it was! thanks so much!
wow! this was amazing! one of the best story's i've read on here! i can't wait till more of your story's come out! mh! i loved it. very exciting, it mixes with all your emotions and i am just speechless...except for how good it was! thanks so much!
8/8/2005 c22 Blackrose4724
:-D. Ok it is going to go on right? Cuz Matts still angry, right? And he has to be all happy that she came back...I want the next chapter...
:-D. Ok it is going to go on right? Cuz Matts still angry, right? And he has to be all happy that she came back...I want the next chapter...
8/7/2005 c22 Kat
I've been reading this for a while now but not reviewing cuz I didn't have anything to say other than "great story, I love it" and those kind of reviews are kind of annoying. Anyway, I was listening to the radio today and I heard a song called Stay with Me (Brass Bed) by Josh Gracin and it made me think of this story right away.
Here's a link to listen to it- http:/music.yahoo.com/ar-306795-videos-Josh-Gracin
I've been reading this for a while now but not reviewing cuz I didn't have anything to say other than "great story, I love it" and those kind of reviews are kind of annoying. Anyway, I was listening to the radio today and I heard a song called Stay with Me (Brass Bed) by Josh Gracin and it made me think of this story right away.
Here's a link to listen to it- http:/music.yahoo.com/ar-306795-videos-Josh-Gracin
8/6/2005 c22 I-eat-paste
OMG I go away for a couple of weeks and when I come back this story has grown so much. I mean it's awesome. I loved having like 6 emails saying this story had been updated. I love all the emotions. And how her realtionship with Matt has grown so much. Is this the end? Anyway thanks for updating so much.
Oh I don't know if you know this but I'm also Noel Dreams. I don't want you to think I justdropped this story. I just changed names.
OMG I go away for a couple of weeks and when I come back this story has grown so much. I mean it's awesome. I loved having like 6 emails saying this story had been updated. I love all the emotions. And how her realtionship with Matt has grown so much. Is this the end? Anyway thanks for updating so much.
Oh I don't know if you know this but I'm also Noel Dreams. I don't want you to think I justdropped this story. I just changed names.
8/6/2005 c22 2katieee
Aw! Thats so sad! Can't wait to see what happens when Matt finds out she's back.
♥Katie
2katieeeAw! Thats so sad! Can't wait to see what happens when Matt finds out she's back.
♥Katie
8/4/2005 c21 lemjo
You're updating so quickly! Lately, everytime I check this story, I'm 2 or 3 chs behind. It's a good thing definately, I just feel like such a slacker in keeping up. I love all the sweetness that's been going on between Matt and Kris in the last few chs. Poor Matt...I knew something like that had to have happened to him in the past because he was so standoffish when he first met Kris. It was important that Kris go home, though. It would not have been appropriate for her to tell her family over the phone. It's cool that her family accepted her word about what was happening...I kept expecting Christina to jump in and defend Blake. I can't believe she started dating him so soon after Kris left...it just seems so wrong. Well, I'm still really enjoying this story and I'm so happy you decided to write beyond Blake going to jail. Now I've got my fingers crossed for Kris to go back to Matt. That's where she belongs! In my opinion of course. Keep up the good work!
You're updating so quickly! Lately, everytime I check this story, I'm 2 or 3 chs behind. It's a good thing definately, I just feel like such a slacker in keeping up. I love all the sweetness that's been going on between Matt and Kris in the last few chs. Poor Matt...I knew something like that had to have happened to him in the past because he was so standoffish when he first met Kris. It was important that Kris go home, though. It would not have been appropriate for her to tell her family over the phone. It's cool that her family accepted her word about what was happening...I kept expecting Christina to jump in and defend Blake. I can't believe she started dating him so soon after Kris left...it just seems so wrong. Well, I'm still really enjoying this story and I'm so happy you decided to write beyond Blake going to jail. Now I've got my fingers crossed for Kris to go back to Matt. That's where she belongs! In my opinion of course. Keep up the good work!
7/31/2005 c20 SweetAshley1500
Wow, what a sad chapter. Poor Matt. Its hard to see him...upset. I'm glad everyting will work out! yay. You are a really good writter, you inspire me to write some too! lol. Well have a nice day and i can't wait to read your next chapter! =)
Wow, what a sad chapter. Poor Matt. Its hard to see him...upset. I'm glad everyting will work out! yay. You are a really good writter, you inspire me to write some too! lol. Well have a nice day and i can't wait to read your next chapter! =)