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1/5/2016 c1 USE THESE
excellent. a bit cringy but that's to be expected with the subject matter of fanboys and low self esteem issues.
however, do you know that there's been a revolutionary invention? it's called the quotation mark, and it looks like this: " "
it indicates to the reader when a person is speaking, and by golly, if you don't use it, it maKES IT REALLY HARD TO READ AND MAKES PEOPLE YEALL AT YOU IN CAPSLOCK.
USE IT.
6/18/2013 c1 indy
why are there no " " quotation marks for dialogues? it looks so weird! but probably a good story nevertheless :]
4/16/2013 c2 2Espn Laflamme
I would like to read this, but with no " " when people are talking it makes it really difficult.
I realize this story is old, so you probably won't fix it up.
I do like the concept of the story though!
5/1/2012 c4 Purplebanana
Where, oh where have the quotation marks gone? Where, oh where could they be?

Seriously though, where are they? I'm enjoying your story well enough, but it without the quotation marks it can be difficult to read, especially when trying to distinguish from thoughts and speech.
8/28/2010 c1 wth
I am very confused by the lack of quotation marks. It makes it really really hard to read. I can't do this.
9/1/2009 c2 LondonCallingx
Sorry, you seem write very well however I can not read this story due to the fact there isn't any "speech marks".
7/5/2009 c1 3aWishThatNeverComesTrue
you are a brilliant writer I... the only thing I have to say about this and I do mean the only thing ... the fact that you gave shane one really good feature(hands) and you didn't bring that back into play other than that it was simply brilliant
12/8/2007 c12 1Skelly Heart
I absolutely adore this story. Both Shane and Dame are great characters and I can't wait to see them grow and develope, hopefully together!

I'll be waiting for your next chapter, I'm sure it will be a good one!
11/7/2007 c12 1986
Just found your story, and I really like it!
9/30/2007 c12 1Gravilove19
I can't wait for your next update. I hope to read more soon.
7/26/2007 c12 RageAgainstReality14
This is great! Please update soon, I want to find out what happens next!
6/23/2007 c12 21Hybrid Rainbow
Fantastic new chapter!

I like it because it's so long. :)

This story keeps getting more and more interesting.
6/4/2007 c12 BGEO
Yay I've been waiting for this update for so long now! Thank you for posting, I loved the chapter with Eric and Nick. Please don't take this long to update again.
6/4/2007 c12 3Violent Pornography
I like this story a lot.

Shane and Dame are really interesting characters

and I like the nicholas story line as well...hes just super cute =]

keep writing

the new chapter was great

Violent Pornography
6/4/2007 c12 ItalianQT
Good chapter! There was a lot of info about nick's situation... Please update soon! :-)
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