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6/27/2005 c1 10satinsmoke
whoa...intense. i like it. you do a really good job of wrapping your reader into the poem...good job.

p.s. thx for reviewing me
6/5/2005 c1 13XxDragon Princess NikkixX
A very powerful poem! Loved the deepness and imagery. Awesome job! *hugz*
3/28/2005 c1 reallybadegg
Awesome. The ending is my favorite part. "so 46 bars later, this freshman is out" What a fantastic line *thumbs up*

I'm glad i stumbled onto this, no regrets, just admiration =D

this is moi signing out
12/10/2004 c1 really-bad-egg
Luv the ending. Nice job. *thumbs up* keep up the good work, write some more poems =P

~Manda
12/9/2004 c1 1R.Valaina
I like your poems. This poem is very sad. Please r/r my story and keep up the great work!
8/31/2004 c1 16kaika switched
Oh wow...this was great. I love the format you put everything in. All the broken sentences. And the repetition near the end was really good, too. Very dark. Loved it. Keep writing!

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