for Locked Doors8/1/2004 c1 Alex
Wow, this is terrific stuff!
Wow, this is terrific stuff!
7/27/2004 c1 
81nesy
Once more, I can understand your feelings so well. Great poem, loneliness through it all.
81nesyOnce more, I can understand your feelings so well. Great poem, loneliness through it all.
7/23/2004 c1 Ericalyn
Once again, it touches me, and is very true. I love the last stanza, a perfect ending. Keep upi the great writing
Once again, it touches me, and is very true. I love the last stanza, a perfect ending. Keep upi the great writing
7/20/2004 c1 3Pont
I love your rhythm. The poem flows very smoothly, and I get a great mental image.
Bravo!
~pont
(call me clueless, but what's a beta? If I can help you there I will!)
3PontI love your rhythm. The poem flows very smoothly, and I get a great mental image.
Bravo!
~pont
(call me clueless, but what's a beta? If I can help you there I will!)
7/17/2004 c1 40singingspeechless
loved it! the rythm you use in ur poems is so nice and just flows off the tongue...good job.
40singingspeechlessloved it! the rythm you use in ur poems is so nice and just flows off the tongue...good job.
7/14/2004 c1 8forgottenmoon831
Wow, great poem, I like the rhyming scheme, and I liked your imagery and the angst you expressed. Keep it up!
8forgottenmoon831Wow, great poem, I like the rhyming scheme, and I liked your imagery and the angst you expressed. Keep it up!
7/14/2004 c1 79Summerdazed
i guess all of us go through this at some point in our lives, and you did a great job writing it down.
review me if you're free!
=summerdazed=
79Summerdazedi guess all of us go through this at some point in our lives, and you did a great job writing it down.
review me if you're free!
=summerdazed=