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8/1/2004 c1 Alex
Wow, this is terrific stuff!
7/27/2004 c1 81nesy
Once more, I can understand your feelings so well. Great poem, loneliness through it all.
7/23/2004 c1 Ericalyn
Once again, it touches me, and is very true. I love the last stanza, a perfect ending. Keep upi the great writing
7/20/2004 c1 3Pont
I love your rhythm. The poem flows very smoothly, and I get a great mental image.
(call me clueless, but what's a beta? If I can help you there I will!)
7/17/2004 c1 40singingspeechless
loved it! the rythm you use in ur poems is so nice and just flows off the tongue...good job.
7/14/2004 c1 8forgottenmoon831
Wow, great poem, I like the rhyming scheme, and I liked your imagery and the angst you expressed. Keep it up!
7/14/2004 c1 49greenbanana
woah that was good! and you made the rhyming flow well
7/14/2004 c1 79Summerdazed
i guess all of us go through this at some point in our lives, and you did a great job writing it down.
review me if you're free!

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