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14Aberrant Bliss
LILI I AM ON FICTIONPRESS FOR SOME REASON READING ROMANCE STORIES AND THEN I DECIDED TO STALK YOUR OLD PROFILE AND READ YOUR OLLDEEST STUF AND YOU ARE SOO COL :D :D :D
MIS YA :D
14Aberrant BlissLILI I AM ON FICTIONPRESS FOR SOME REASON READING ROMANCE STORIES AND THEN I DECIDED TO STALK YOUR OLD PROFILE AND READ YOUR OLLDEEST STUF AND YOU ARE SOO COL :D :D :D
MIS YA :D
10/30/2004 c1 3LM Kale
Interesting poem and it's pretty good too. I hope to see more work posted up here soon. If writing is something you want to do and if you continue to work hard on that goal without losing hope, just think what you might be able to come up with. You're what, 13? I think if you continue to write, you'll end up with remarkable poems and stories. Hell, I started writing a little bit before I was 13 (not to say that now I like what I wrote). I improved so much because somebody stood behind me to help me. So yea, I'm right here behind you, hoping to see another poem or a story posted here. ^_^
L*M Kale
3LM KaleInteresting poem and it's pretty good too. I hope to see more work posted up here soon. If writing is something you want to do and if you continue to work hard on that goal without losing hope, just think what you might be able to come up with. You're what, 13? I think if you continue to write, you'll end up with remarkable poems and stories. Hell, I started writing a little bit before I was 13 (not to say that now I like what I wrote). I improved so much because somebody stood behind me to help me. So yea, I'm right here behind you, hoping to see another poem or a story posted here. ^_^
L*M Kale
10/15/2004 c1 31Shadow Gryphon
Certainly interesting, and not bad at all. I'd be happy to look at anything else you wrote.
31Shadow GryphonCertainly interesting, and not bad at all. I'd be happy to look at anything else you wrote.
8/17/2004 c1 53Individual-9086
Interesting. This is a really creative concept, I liked it. Maybe you could build more on this. You really have some potenital here, you should try to do some other writing. No one is going to judge you to hard on this site, and if they do, don't take it too seriously. I mean, you are only thirteen, you have so much time to improve. Don't be afraid to let people see what you can do!
53Individual-9086Interesting. This is a really creative concept, I liked it. Maybe you could build more on this. You really have some potenital here, you should try to do some other writing. No one is going to judge you to hard on this site, and if they do, don't take it too seriously. I mean, you are only thirteen, you have so much time to improve. Don't be afraid to let people see what you can do!