for Uncommon Betrayals8/8/2004 c3 MusicalMooky
Nice ending line. "That's classified." I too hate being left out of something. Not that I've ever been doing anything classified, it's just that it's annoying when you know people are keeping something from you. Anyway, please update. I think this storyline is great.
Nice ending line. "That's classified." I too hate being left out of something. Not that I've ever been doing anything classified, it's just that it's annoying when you know people are keeping something from you. Anyway, please update. I think this storyline is great.
8/8/2004 c2 MusicalMooky
Yes that was sweet! I love characters with interesting names. It makes them that much more special. It's great to see that Max and her Dad have a pretty great relationship.
Yes that was sweet! I love characters with interesting names. It makes them that much more special. It's great to see that Max and her Dad have a pretty great relationship.
8/8/2004 c1 MusicalMooky
I love stories with action and missions. This is great. Please continue this story.
I love stories with action and missions. This is great. Please continue this story.
8/8/2004 c3 decree of fate
even though it was short, i loved it! i probably would have strangled nick or myself if i had to work with him. lol.
even though it was short, i loved it! i probably would have strangled nick or myself if i had to work with him. lol.
7/24/2004 c2 Lily
Nice story. Is the mole Nick? I hope not
Nice story. Is the mole Nick? I hope not
7/23/2004 c2 decree of fate
this story is awesome! i love the characters and the conflict between max and her father makes it more interesting.
this story is awesome! i love the characters and the conflict between max and her father makes it more interesting.
7/22/2004 c1 
53Individual-9086
This seems like a really great start but it is a little bit hard to read. If you seperated your paragraphs, I think that more people would read this story. For example, every time that a character speaks, you should start a new paragraph. Other than that, this is an awesome story, you should update.
53Individual-9086This seems like a really great start but it is a little bit hard to read. If you seperated your paragraphs, I think that more people would read this story. For example, every time that a character speaks, you should start a new paragraph. Other than that, this is an awesome story, you should update.