for Tell Me1/18/2005 c1 
49SleepDontWeep
wow.. this is beautiful... i love 'tell me u cared and not just alot'... its very realistic and truly spectacular! well done! keep up d gud wokr love and admiration Gretchen45 x please r an r my new story 'Truly madly deeply' as itd mean alot! tanx x i missed talkin to u!
49SleepDontWeepwow.. this is beautiful... i love 'tell me u cared and not just alot'... its very realistic and truly spectacular! well done! keep up d gud wokr love and admiration Gretchen45 x please r an r my new story 'Truly madly deeply' as itd mean alot! tanx x i missed talkin to u!
8/27/2004 c1 20defiance-is-lovely
wow...beautiful job! i really like the lines that started with Tell, just because they werent anywhere else in the poem...it stuck out and made a big impact. the mood and tone are really nicely portrayed too...i know its hard to express the kind of feelings you had to in this piece, but you did a great job...hope to hear more from you soon!
20defiance-is-lovelywow...beautiful job! i really like the lines that started with Tell, just because they werent anywhere else in the poem...it stuck out and made a big impact. the mood and tone are really nicely portrayed too...i know its hard to express the kind of feelings you had to in this piece, but you did a great job...hope to hear more from you soon!
8/15/2004 c1 2Jennifer H. Westall
Hey! I really like this! Sorry I haven't been around in forever. Got side-tracked for a while. But seriously, this is good. I hope you keep writing poetry!
2Jennifer H. WestallHey! I really like this! Sorry I haven't been around in forever. Got side-tracked for a while. But seriously, this is good. I hope you keep writing poetry!
7/23/2004 c1 28Arayuldawen
aww. I really do like it. Good job, the rhyming scheme really flows. I really like the last two lines.
~Arayuldawen~
28Arayuldawenaww. I really do like it. Good job, the rhyming scheme really flows. I really like the last two lines.
~Arayuldawen~