for Eagle Boy7/16/2004 c1 DarkNepenthe
Some paragraphs would make this much easier to read. As it is, one huge clump of words and a few small ones, it's rather hard to keep your eyes on the words - or at least it is for me. Of course, it's a very interesting idea. Suitable formatting would improve it greatly.
Some paragraphs would make this much easier to read. As it is, one huge clump of words and a few small ones, it's rather hard to keep your eyes on the words - or at least it is for me. Of course, it's a very interesting idea. Suitable formatting would improve it greatly.