
7/20/2004 c1
99underjoyed
Ahh, well done. I like the last stanza best. Very true, though, there's something distinctly unattractive about the fairytale princesses. What's interesting about somebody so apparently perfect? Your kind of princess is much more appealing. Anyway, well-written, and nice choice of topic.

Ahh, well done. I like the last stanza best. Very true, though, there's something distinctly unattractive about the fairytale princesses. What's interesting about somebody so apparently perfect? Your kind of princess is much more appealing. Anyway, well-written, and nice choice of topic.
7/17/2004 c1
11Mystical notes
A review from myself to all fo those who read this!
This was written for "my perfect princess" she is who is portrayed in this poem and I love her SO much.
I hope that all of you find your perfect Princess of Prince out there!
TO MY PRINCESS, I LOVE YOU.
This simple poem does not even begin to explain my love!

A review from myself to all fo those who read this!
This was written for "my perfect princess" she is who is portrayed in this poem and I love her SO much.
I hope that all of you find your perfect Princess of Prince out there!
TO MY PRINCESS, I LOVE YOU.
This simple poem does not even begin to explain my love!
7/17/2004 c1
7Captain JT
Dear Megan,
This poem was...interesting I guess you could say. The rhyme scheme was nice, but the flow was a little... rough. There were some tight squeezes I feel, but overall I like the central message. You did a good job with this one. This is a rather cutisy BLAH BLAH poem. Not that its a bad thing... You need one of those every now and then.
Captain JT

Dear Megan,
This poem was...interesting I guess you could say. The rhyme scheme was nice, but the flow was a little... rough. There were some tight squeezes I feel, but overall I like the central message. You did a good job with this one. This is a rather cutisy BLAH BLAH poem. Not that its a bad thing... You need one of those every now and then.
Captain JT
7/17/2004 c1
32pointythings
Aw...that's so sweet! I want a boy to say that about me. *sniffle* I'm sad now. (I'm only 13, by the way.) OK, to business. Is glitz the right word for this kind of poem? It doesn't seem to fit. I like tthat you start each verse the same way.

Aw...that's so sweet! I want a boy to say that about me. *sniffle* I'm sad now. (I'm only 13, by the way.) OK, to business. Is glitz the right word for this kind of poem? It doesn't seem to fit. I like tthat you start each verse the same way.
7/17/2004 c1
25esperanzamor
I like it, its simple, fairy-taleish but not, it flows well and i reall y enjoyed it

I like it, its simple, fairy-taleish but not, it flows well and i reall y enjoyed it