for Sweet Sixteen7/20/2004 c1 
13Duble-Helix
This is great, and it's got a good messege behind it. By the way, I was born on the 10th of March, have lived in NZ & my first language was Spanish, hehe we have vague similarities. But yea anyway great poem, I enjoyed reading it. Peace ^_~
13Duble-HelixThis is great, and it's got a good messege behind it. By the way, I was born on the 10th of March, have lived in NZ & my first language was Spanish, hehe we have vague similarities. But yea anyway great poem, I enjoyed reading it. Peace ^_~
7/17/2004 c1 25esperanzamor
hey - from author, me again - um, i realize this sounds not what i meant. This poem is basically about me realizing i didn't need 'love' from a boyfriend, once i had found God's great love - he fulled the gap I had, and i didn't long fora boyfriend anymore. HOWEVER, i definately aren't against relationships, and i do want to marry one day - but i don't want to or need to emmerse myself in one now, coz - from my experience and watching friends - its like play-relationships, which are never going to work out, and are for the wrong reasons (I used to crave love, whatever form it came in, from whatever guy would give it to me. This is just how i want to live my life - not having a relationship until its serious, and possibly forever.
25esperanzamorhey - from author, me again - um, i realize this sounds not what i meant. This poem is basically about me realizing i didn't need 'love' from a boyfriend, once i had found God's great love - he fulled the gap I had, and i didn't long fora boyfriend anymore. HOWEVER, i definately aren't against relationships, and i do want to marry one day - but i don't want to or need to emmerse myself in one now, coz - from my experience and watching friends - its like play-relationships, which are never going to work out, and are for the wrong reasons (I used to crave love, whatever form it came in, from whatever guy would give it to me. This is just how i want to live my life - not having a relationship until its serious, and possibly forever.
7/17/2004 c1 11Mystical notes
Powerful, yet again!
although, I do not agree, I respect your message.
In line 16, hsould the word "lives" be "life's" I'm befuddled,
And, doesn't God want you to be happy, and wouldn't finding love, in human form, be a good thing? I am just curious...
tata
11Mystical notesPowerful, yet again!
although, I do not agree, I respect your message.
In line 16, hsould the word "lives" be "life's" I'm befuddled,
And, doesn't God want you to be happy, and wouldn't finding love, in human form, be a good thing? I am just curious...
tata