8/27/2004 c1 5Jim Cook jr
Excellance comes to those who share. I think that this poem was written and expressed wonderfully. You have very strong beliefs, and you must stick to them, especially in this world. Many people who think they are powerful and have it made, will try to pull you away from God and your beliefs, but remember, they cannot even place one star in the sky, or create one blade of grass. God is with you. Keep writing, and if you would be so kind to review my work, thankyou,
-Clover
Excellance comes to those who share. I think that this poem was written and expressed wonderfully. You have very strong beliefs, and you must stick to them, especially in this world. Many people who think they are powerful and have it made, will try to pull you away from God and your beliefs, but remember, they cannot even place one star in the sky, or create one blade of grass. God is with you. Keep writing, and if you would be so kind to review my work, thankyou,
-Clover
7/17/2004 c1 11Mystical notes
AGAIN, I must say Powerful!
I only wish that I could feel this, I only wish that I wasn't raised without religion, I only wish that Iwasn't torn between logic and faith. These simple poems, give me a spark of hope, a glimmer of light that tells me someday I will find meaning!
Good writing,
Megan
AGAIN, I must say Powerful!
I only wish that I could feel this, I only wish that I wasn't raised without religion, I only wish that Iwasn't torn between logic and faith. These simple poems, give me a spark of hope, a glimmer of light that tells me someday I will find meaning!
Good writing,
Megan