for Angelic Thought Process7/17/2004 c1 
32pointythings
This is really good overall, but you repeat some words. Also, are lullabies cheerful? And where did the fangs and bloodstains come from? That needs to be a bit clearer. I like starlit roses.
32pointythingsThis is really good overall, but you repeat some words. Also, are lullabies cheerful? And where did the fangs and bloodstains come from? That needs to be a bit clearer. I like starlit roses.
7/17/2004 c1 13arwen-evenstar89
I love it! Lol... But really, it was very descriptive, very figurative, and had great imagery. The part about the fangs and bloodstained hands kinda caught me off guard tho... but i really liked it!
13arwen-evenstar89I love it! Lol... But really, it was very descriptive, very figurative, and had great imagery. The part about the fangs and bloodstained hands kinda caught me off guard tho... but i really liked it!