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12/14/2004 c1 70Alex-Blake
Started off quite well then went downhill. OTT of the usage of 'melt', you didtn capture the feroticity and the power of volcanos, not remarkable or memourable.Change the last few parts and you might have a decent poem on your hands.

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10/31/2004 c1 20Nanners
This is a pretty cool poem...I gotta say that I like it...(I always say that. Always. WHAT IS WRONG WITH ME? Don't get me wrong, I really DO like it...I just...wow...)
8/20/2004 c1 9Kalopsia
Again...another great poem. You bring out a lot of emotion in your writing. And it's a really great gift. You show promise so keep it up.
7/18/2004 c1 119AntiPleasure
Volcanos are an eerie thought that enter my mind but you had a way of dimming that fear. You make this poem go along quite smoothley. Nice work. Could be expanded a tinge but hey, this is good.
Jenna xx

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