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2/21/2005 c1 23Whispered Secrets
Beautiful. It brings a whole new meaning to our flag and what it represents.
1/3/2005 c1 3Leo Eigenmann
Wow, what a beautiful, patriotic poem! Well done.
1/2/2005 c1 21Blazingkitten
thanks for the review. Please some of my other work and tell what is good and/or bad. I believe that you are a very good writer. I loved this poem, it is a perfect decription of what all people should believe in. Their freedom to fight for what is right.
12/18/2004 c1 24Sarah-Brighteyes
This is a beautiful poem about our flag and the meaning behind it. I was wondering if I could print this out and give it to a friend of mine who is in the military. He is in Iraq right now and this poem seems fitting. I love the lines representing the colors, "all under the blue star filled sky." Perfect mood. I loved it. Keep up the great writing.
8/14/2004 c1 7Alareic
Wow...awesome poem...you should try to write more poems! I can't write them myself...
8/10/2004 c1 20CNorth
Star, take down your profile! Quick! My mom has taken an interest in this site, and there are some things I'd rather she didn't know.
7/31/2004 c1 Infamous Writer
This is very good. One of the few poetry entries I've read here at FP. Um... I enjoyed the flow of the poem, which was smooth.
Answering to your reviews: I actually didn't know Ronin meant "masterless samurai" until I thought up the name, lol. I was thinking about making a part 2 where Kieka vows for vengeance... should I? I'm not too sure... Thanks for your review for "Her Bloodstained Katana", too, I really do enjoy feedback.
7/25/2004 c1 15MercuryMoon
^_^ I like it. It's a very nice poem and is patriotic, too. ^^
7/19/2004 c1 69MayaJade
Very patriotic... (i think I spelled it wrong)

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