for The Old Banner2/21/2005 c1 
23Whispered Secrets
Beautiful. It brings a whole new meaning to our flag and what it represents.
23Whispered SecretsBeautiful. It brings a whole new meaning to our flag and what it represents.
1/2/2005 c1 21Blazingkitten
thanks for the review. Please some of my other work and tell what is good and/or bad. I believe that you are a very good writer. I loved this poem, it is a perfect decription of what all people should believe in. Their freedom to fight for what is right.
21Blazingkittenthanks for the review. Please some of my other work and tell what is good and/or bad. I believe that you are a very good writer. I loved this poem, it is a perfect decription of what all people should believe in. Their freedom to fight for what is right.
12/18/2004 c1 24Sarah-Brighteyes
This is a beautiful poem about our flag and the meaning behind it. I was wondering if I could print this out and give it to a friend of mine who is in the military. He is in Iraq right now and this poem seems fitting. I love the lines representing the colors, "all under the blue star filled sky." Perfect mood. I loved it. Keep up the great writing.
24Sarah-BrighteyesThis is a beautiful poem about our flag and the meaning behind it. I was wondering if I could print this out and give it to a friend of mine who is in the military. He is in Iraq right now and this poem seems fitting. I love the lines representing the colors, "all under the blue star filled sky." Perfect mood. I loved it. Keep up the great writing.
8/14/2004 c1 7Alareic
Wow...awesome poem...you should try to write more poems! I can't write them myself...
-Alareic-
7AlareicWow...awesome poem...you should try to write more poems! I can't write them myself...
-Alareic-
8/10/2004 c1 20CNorth
Star, take down your profile! Quick! My mom has taken an interest in this site, and there are some things I'd rather she didn't know.
20CNorthStar, take down your profile! Quick! My mom has taken an interest in this site, and there are some things I'd rather she didn't know.
7/31/2004 c1 Infamous Writer
This is very good. One of the few poetry entries I've read here at FP. Um... I enjoyed the flow of the poem, which was smooth.
Answering to your reviews: I actually didn't know Ronin meant "masterless samurai" until I thought up the name, lol. I was thinking about making a part 2 where Kieka vows for vengeance... should I? I'm not too sure... Thanks for your review for "Her Bloodstained Katana", too, I really do enjoy feedback.
This is very good. One of the few poetry entries I've read here at FP. Um... I enjoyed the flow of the poem, which was smooth.
Answering to your reviews: I actually didn't know Ronin meant "masterless samurai" until I thought up the name, lol. I was thinking about making a part 2 where Kieka vows for vengeance... should I? I'm not too sure... Thanks for your review for "Her Bloodstained Katana", too, I really do enjoy feedback.