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6/10/2006 c1 109ADSpencer
Interesting story. You could use more description, but otherwise, I like the characters.
7/29/2004 c1 1Angie50024
...Intresting... I like reading stuff that gets into the story fast.
7/26/2004 c6 142Eirthe Rose Crystal
Once again, I have to say I love your descriptions. Nightred seems cool... I feel sorry for Robin though..
Anyway, nice ending. Hope you write more soon; I want to see who saved them. :)
7/26/2004 c5 Eirthe Rose Crystal
:P I feel sorry for the two.. Things never seem to work out well for them...
7/26/2004 c4 Eirthe Rose Crystal
Wow... Robin's annoying, huh? But she saved Sarah and Isabella, soo... I like your description of Narcosis. ^_^ Can't wait to see what happens to Sarah and Isabella.
7/26/2004 c3 Eirthe Rose Crystal
:P Love your jokes...
Ahh... and there's the twist in the story... *goes off to read more*
7/23/2004 c1 1Hungfester
That was so Awesome! You kept me excited the whole story.
7/21/2004 c2 142Eirthe Rose Crystal
:P I like the bits of humor you add into the story. Hope to read more soon!
7/21/2004 c1 Eirthe Rose Crystal
I like the way that you start off right in the middle of the action. It really draws the reader into the story right away. I think this'll turn out to be a very interesting story. Can't wait to find out what happens...

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