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7/27/2004 c1 17the mouse that roared
Well, it was kind of confusing. Work on your organization to express the emotion better. I would do a longer review, but I have to write a short story for tomorrow, so I must go.
Favorite line:
Keep my tears locked away for a day when they
Really deserve to fall out
7/20/2004 c1 28Tarantino
the feeling like you are falling into a void. Sad lonely hurt...very emotional good job.

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