for Through Your Eyes8/11/2004 c3 
3Pont
Whe! happines! I love the way this story is going. Freya andn elea are great characters! ^_^
what's your email address? I'll have to search for the poem, sorry; i got a ton of emails while i was in st. louis.
thanx ^_^
~Pont
3PontWhe! happines! I love the way this story is going. Freya andn elea are great characters! ^_^
what's your email address? I'll have to search for the poem, sorry; i got a ton of emails while i was in st. louis.
thanx ^_^
~Pont
8/2/2004 c1 81nesy
I liked a lot this story, short but it reflects very well both points of view. Maybe Freya will learn someday appearences are not everything and Elea will understand that not everyone hates her. I used to be an Elea.
81nesyI liked a lot this story, short but it reflects very well both points of view. Maybe Freya will learn someday appearences are not everything and Elea will understand that not everyone hates her. I used to be an Elea.
8/1/2004 c2 Pont Maikaram
yeah, this is pont
go ahead and delete this review, but I needed to respond to your problem post. If doesn't work, try those are my only emails ;_; but I'll soon be setting up another way of contacting me, if neither of those work
~*wishes*~
~ponteh
yeah, this is pont
go ahead and delete this review, but I needed to respond to your problem post. If doesn't work, try those are my only emails ;_; but I'll soon be setting up another way of contacting me, if neither of those work
~*wishes*~
~ponteh
8/1/2004 c2 Alex
Brilliant stuff. You should submit this for any short story competition you can find
Brilliant stuff. You should submit this for any short story competition you can find
7/30/2004 c1 anon
This is great, but are you sure you wrote the first line?
This is great, but are you sure you wrote the first line?
7/24/2004 c2 3Pont
Yay! Update!
Hehe I still love your points of view. I can't wait to see who wins~ *excited* This is great!
(I wrote greed and orange twilight awhile ago, when I was a little cheesed at the whole alaskan forest preserve/oil drilling thing ^_^ It isn't directed at anyone in particular, really, just the death of nature. I just get sad when that kinda stuff happens)
Update please!
I'd be happy to be your beta (if you still need one)!
Keep up the great work!
~ponteh ^_~ *handing out cookies*
3PontYay! Update!
Hehe I still love your points of view. I can't wait to see who wins~ *excited* This is great!
(I wrote greed and orange twilight awhile ago, when I was a little cheesed at the whole alaskan forest preserve/oil drilling thing ^_^ It isn't directed at anyone in particular, really, just the death of nature. I just get sad when that kinda stuff happens)
Update please!
I'd be happy to be your beta (if you still need one)!
Keep up the great work!
~ponteh ^_~ *handing out cookies*
7/23/2004 c2 8forgottenmoon831
Good chapter, it's okay if it's short. ^_^ I like how you're telling us more about the characters, like Freya's parents always fighting and Elea seems to be one of those really academically competitive people. Write more! I must know what happens!
8forgottenmoon831Good chapter, it's okay if it's short. ^_^ I like how you're telling us more about the characters, like Freya's parents always fighting and Elea seems to be one of those really academically competitive people. Write more! I must know what happens!
7/22/2004 c1 forgottenmoon831
This is going great so far! I like how you're developing the characters, Freya sounds very unique and original. I love their names too! Anyway, upload soon, I wanna know what happens, Are they gonna become friends?
This is going great so far! I like how you're developing the characters, Freya sounds very unique and original. I love their names too! Anyway, upload soon, I wanna know what happens, Are they gonna become friends?
7/20/2004 c1 3Pont
O Great beginning! I love the idea behind the story! You handled the different points of view beutifully.
Elephant? Lol, an elephant with insane skill maybe. ^_^ Thanks for the +fav, anyhow *huggles*
If it would not be too much trouble, could you inform me when you update? I want to follow the story but my author alert is not working ;_; (my email is on my profile)
I'll check every few days anyways, if you don't want to bother :P
~ponteh
3PontO Great beginning! I love the idea behind the story! You handled the different points of view beutifully.
Elephant? Lol, an elephant with insane skill maybe. ^_^ Thanks for the +fav, anyhow *huggles*
If it would not be too much trouble, could you inform me when you update? I want to follow the story but my author alert is not working ;_; (my email is on my profile)
I'll check every few days anyways, if you don't want to bother :P
~ponteh
7/20/2004 c1 infamouslyanonymous
cool:) Freya seems different from most popular people, content to sit on their popularity and really are as superficial as they seem, she seems different... somehow?
cool:) Freya seems different from most popular people, content to sit on their popularity and really are as superficial as they seem, she seems different... somehow?