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10/21/2005 c1 31Ky-Ky Apocalypse
Let me tell you, after reading this I am very close to tears, and not much does that to me... well okay, I lied a lot does, but that doesn't change anything it was great!
10/12/2005 c1 64atalantea
The rhythm is kind of tweaking, the rhyming is kind of forced for me but it was okay. It was kind of repetitive in a way that I can't explain, maybe it's just me. The imagery is rich. "For I knew death had one more to claim." I love that line. :D
10/11/2005 c1 132mizu no kokoro
wow... the sadness... i hope i never have to experience such a feeling~ good work

keep writing!
10/2/2004 c1 18u-will-never-know
OMG! that was brilliant! When your profile said you were japanese i was expecting a few grammar mistakes BUT there were none! I wish i could write that well, and i'm from england. *ahem* that was exellent. your definately going on my favourite authors list :D and thanks for the review
8/12/2004 c1 368EWindheim
WHAHH! This is one of the most touching, saddening poems I have ever read. *sniff sniff* I'm putting this on my favorites list cause it's just that good. Oh...sorry for not reviewing for so long.
~Hawke
8/12/2004 c1 Elbereth141
Have i mentioned this is one of my favourite poems eva? Thanks for a review!
8/1/2004 c1 20Elbereth141
**bursts into tears** So sad! Why did it have to end so sad? **sulks**
LOVED IT WRITE MORE!
-Elbereth141-
7/30/2004 c1 30Myriah
This was a great poem, I love it! It was written soo well, the feelings of vain hope and helplessnes, so sad!
7/21/2004 c1 10marie alexandria
you did a good job capturing the helpless feel and your rhyme scheme is done very nicely :)

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