for A Changing Friendship3/25/2005 c1 
25Munchin
yeah.. it is like that. it is something else.. this piece talks within itself. Beautiful
25Munchinyeah.. it is like that. it is something else.. this piece talks within itself. Beautiful
3/24/2005 c1 14method acting
amazing. You put everyhting so beautifuly. Ryming works for you, nothing ever seems fourced. damn i wish i had your talent. :-p Great job. :-)
14method actingamazing. You put everyhting so beautifuly. Ryming works for you, nothing ever seems fourced. damn i wish i had your talent. :-p Great job. :-)
8/5/2004 c1 11Locomotive Breath
ooh, i like this, and have gone through the same with my friends. Just a few suggestions, on the last stanza make sure you spell "to," the 'much' way , "too." and i think it may flow a bit better if you make it "STranger we now are."
it was awesome!
11Locomotive Breathooh, i like this, and have gone through the same with my friends. Just a few suggestions, on the last stanza make sure you spell "to," the 'much' way , "too." and i think it may flow a bit better if you make it "STranger we now are."
it was awesome!
7/27/2004 c1 191Trinity Joselyn Carter
awesome.. i totally agree with it... she was being such a bitch! :D
191Trinity Joselyn Carterawesome.. i totally agree with it... she was being such a bitch! :D
7/21/2004 c1 Anime Freakizoid
i had a few friends like that, but hey you can make new friends and start over! thanks again for reviewing, i always like to hear comments from new fans don't you?
-anime freakizoid X^_^X
i had a few friends like that, but hey you can make new friends and start over! thanks again for reviewing, i always like to hear comments from new fans don't you?
-anime freakizoid X^_^X
7/21/2004 c1 16Wee-lil-pirate
i've been there. you echoed my every thought...its amazing, and i hope things work out for you...they didn't for me.
16Wee-lil-piratei've been there. you echoed my every thought...its amazing, and i hope things work out for you...they didn't for me.