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3/25/2005 c1 25Munchin
yeah.. it is like that. it is something else.. this piece talks within itself. Beautiful
3/24/2005 c1 14method acting
amazing. You put everyhting so beautifuly. Ryming works for you, nothing ever seems fourced. damn i wish i had your talent. :-p Great job. :-)
8/5/2004 c1 11Locomotive Breath
ooh, i like this, and have gone through the same with my friends. Just a few suggestions, on the last stanza make sure you spell "to," the 'much' way , "too." and i think it may flow a bit better if you make it "STranger we now are."
it was awesome!
7/27/2004 c1 191Trinity Joselyn Carter
awesome.. i totally agree with it... she was being such a bitch! :D
7/21/2004 c1 Anime Freakizoid
i had a few friends like that, but hey you can make new friends and start over! thanks again for reviewing, i always like to hear comments from new fans don't you?
-anime freakizoid X^_^X
7/21/2004 c1 16Wee-lil-pirate
i've been there. you echoed my every thought...its amazing, and i hope things work out for you...they didn't for me.
7/21/2004 c1 18smeafield
i like this, i like the way you made it flow, i can't seem to do that

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