for Giving Up on Me5/27/2005 c1 Clap Clap Raise Your Hands
nobody's perfect as the saying / song goes, but don't give up, it's the trying that's important, it's great that you would TRY to change and that you realise what should change, change is hard to do! i have to say this isnt my fave, i guess the whole poem seems very pessimisitc, which is what it's about i know, but i like to be left with a glimmer of hope! x weasel within x
nobody's perfect as the saying / song goes, but don't give up, it's the trying that's important, it's great that you would TRY to change and that you realise what should change, change is hard to do! i have to say this isnt my fave, i guess the whole poem seems very pessimisitc, which is what it's about i know, but i like to be left with a glimmer of hope! x weasel within x
1/2/2005 c1 
42Emmytastic gal
hey! whoa, its like I was hit with a full blow of emotion. I love it. Arranged in such a beautiful way, its great. Your use of words make your compositions so easy to read. Keep it up, you're definetly talented. Oh and check out some of my newest poems if you get a moment! write on...
42Emmytastic galhey! whoa, its like I was hit with a full blow of emotion. I love it. Arranged in such a beautiful way, its great. Your use of words make your compositions so easy to read. Keep it up, you're definetly talented. Oh and check out some of my newest poems if you get a moment! write on...
10/29/2004 c1 contrivant
In nineteen short lines you've managed to sum up the feelings I've had about my life for the past three years. Congratulations it's beautiful, but in such a tragic way.
In nineteen short lines you've managed to sum up the feelings I've had about my life for the past three years. Congratulations it's beautiful, but in such a tragic way.
8/7/2004 c1 123alors
i like this piece; i think many people are like that. maybe even worse, they may have lots of different facades they use on different people. and sometimes they want to change, but they may not be able to.
123alorsi like this piece; i think many people are like that. maybe even worse, they may have lots of different facades they use on different people. and sometimes they want to change, but they may not be able to.
8/5/2004 c1 122alwayslove
Really great poem, sounds like how i feel sometimes when I awake up, good job!
122alwaysloveReally great poem, sounds like how i feel sometimes when I awake up, good job!