for To Please a God8/17/2004 c1 Incrys
Sorry, the one thing that stuck in my mind as soon as I hit the corresponding line was "Ew, animal sacrifice..." Aside from that, I thought it was interesting though. I did like the final stanza.
Sorry, the one thing that stuck in my mind as soon as I hit the corresponding line was "Ew, animal sacrifice..." Aside from that, I thought it was interesting though. I did like the final stanza.
7/27/2004 c1 
47Kenishiro
That man is loco i tell you, loco! anyway love ur poem... that man is dancing nude... he is loco, come on join him!
47KenishiroThat man is loco i tell you, loco! anyway love ur poem... that man is dancing nude... he is loco, come on join him!
7/22/2004 c1 suzieque
Nice wriitten. An interesting perspective. I wonder why he wants God to come down?
Nice wriitten. An interesting perspective. I wonder why he wants God to come down?
7/22/2004 c1 DrammaQueen
Nice way to pose a question which can only be answered by deep thought
"But even if God is pleased,
Is that enough to bring Him down?"
i love it!
Nice way to pose a question which can only be answered by deep thought
"But even if God is pleased,
Is that enough to bring Him down?"
i love it!