
11/23/2004 c1
14I-Am-Me-Only-Me
Aly: dude that was cool! i'm reading more of these!micheal: interasting...

Aly: dude that was cool! i'm reading more of these!micheal: interasting...
9/4/2004 c1
27RingWraith14
I loved it...
I love how you explianed her fear of the moon...
Keep writing...

I loved it...
I love how you explianed her fear of the moon...
Keep writing...
8/23/2004 c1
1JDWrites
Well...I dunno if you'd wanna read and review my stuff, it ain't fantasy...well Fangs and Feathers kinda is but he's a vampire...and it's all about gushy lovin'! But some of it's gay, we all love that ne? NE? *sigh* Oh well, if you wanna, you can review my stuff, I'll understand if you don't. *sniff*

Well...I dunno if you'd wanna read and review my stuff, it ain't fantasy...well Fangs and Feathers kinda is but he's a vampire...and it's all about gushy lovin'! But some of it's gay, we all love that ne? NE? *sigh* Oh well, if you wanna, you can review my stuff, I'll understand if you don't. *sniff*
7/22/2004 c1
22Anathelia
awsome poem I really like the imagery.
trish
please R&R mine it would mean alot to me

awsome poem I really like the imagery.
trish
please R&R mine it would mean alot to me
7/22/2004 c1
10redsbury
As a major fan of werewolves (among other things), I must say that this was very good. Describing such a transformation could easily be boring and dull, but you made it interesting for the reader. Bravo! Oh, there's something I want to point out: where you say "If not she will kill before the night is done", I don't know, maybe it's just me, but it doesn't seem to make sense. Oh well. Other than that, I enjoyed it and keep writing!

As a major fan of werewolves (among other things), I must say that this was very good. Describing such a transformation could easily be boring and dull, but you made it interesting for the reader. Bravo! Oh, there's something I want to point out: where you say "If not she will kill before the night is done", I don't know, maybe it's just me, but it doesn't seem to make sense. Oh well. Other than that, I enjoyed it and keep writing!