for Sleep Away Forever7/24/2004 c1 
29Hangman
Thats a nice poem. I dont know what you meant by "fabricated" dreams (I understand the word and context, just not your meaning).
I particularly liked the ending, classy finish.
29HangmanThats a nice poem. I dont know what you meant by "fabricated" dreams (I understand the word and context, just not your meaning).
I particularly liked the ending, classy finish.
7/23/2004 c1 53emrldeyedragon
This is awesome, I love it so very much, you write really good happy poems!When I try it comes off corny.. I'd love to sleep it all away, if it weren't for nightmares that I had so often...^_^ Take a bow! *applauds*
53emrldeyedragonThis is awesome, I love it so very much, you write really good happy poems!When I try it comes off corny.. I'd love to sleep it all away, if it weren't for nightmares that I had so often...^_^ Take a bow! *applauds*
7/22/2004 c1 79INTP
I like this-it's so light and airy. The rhythm is never irregular or forced, and it's a pleasure to read. I can really relate to the subject too because I can just imagine how great it would be to always dream and you expressed that well.
79INTPI like this-it's so light and airy. The rhythm is never irregular or forced, and it's a pleasure to read. I can really relate to the subject too because I can just imagine how great it would be to always dream and you expressed that well.
7/22/2004 c1 Raven Gray
wow wonderful expression of feeling i luv this poem i juss wish that i wasn't afraid to sleep unlike you because i have an unknown fear of sleeping..well i'll stop cuz u dont' really care bout that anways great poem n keep up the good work
ps plz review some of my work
wow wonderful expression of feeling i luv this poem i juss wish that i wasn't afraid to sleep unlike you because i have an unknown fear of sleeping..well i'll stop cuz u dont' really care bout that anways great poem n keep up the good work
ps plz review some of my work