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1/31/2005 c1 Aneesa
Aww I think it's sweet in that sad way.
12/30/2004 c1 2Been to Hell
awesome
12/19/2004 c1 3MissLeigh021
reminds me of a song. this is really nice.
12/7/2004 c1 19ColdFrost
A great haiku. I love the last line, it just has the feeling of finality (at least to me). Well written!
8/12/2004 c1 Melissa Lea Night
i think this is my favorite so far
7/30/2004 c1 David Stephen
Again, brilliant. You have the structure correct and you haven't forced anything to obtain it. This is very good. David
7/25/2004 c1 Bob'N'Cat
Well, I don't have much to comment on considering that it's a haiku. I'll just say that it was okay, a little bit sad [not as in it's badly written; I mean the emotional term], but okay. Good job.
7/25/2004 c1 Stephen Fierce Publications
Good, very good.
7/24/2004 c1 9twilightwriter07
Nicely done...it's so sad.
7/24/2004 c1 2Queen of dawn
o.k short and to the point don't know what to say. i'm going to read a longer fic you've written and comment on that.
7/23/2004 c1 10redsbury
Very nice! It's simple, but it's good.
7/23/2004 c1 10Meleny
...it made me sad...
what can you say about a haiku? It's well written...
Anyways I liked it it was good.
Good Job.
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