for Forgotten1/31/2005 c1 Aneesa
Aww I think it's sweet in that sad way.
Aww I think it's sweet in that sad way.
12/7/2004 c1 
19ColdFrost
A great haiku. I love the last line, it just has the feeling of finality (at least to me). Well written!
19ColdFrostA great haiku. I love the last line, it just has the feeling of finality (at least to me). Well written!
7/30/2004 c1 David Stephen
Again, brilliant. You have the structure correct and you haven't forced anything to obtain it. This is very good. David
Again, brilliant. You have the structure correct and you haven't forced anything to obtain it. This is very good. David
7/25/2004 c1 Bob'N'Cat
Well, I don't have much to comment on considering that it's a haiku. I'll just say that it was okay, a little bit sad [not as in it's badly written; I mean the emotional term], but okay. Good job.
Well, I don't have much to comment on considering that it's a haiku. I'll just say that it was okay, a little bit sad [not as in it's badly written; I mean the emotional term], but okay. Good job.
7/24/2004 c1 2Queen of dawn
o.k short and to the point don't know what to say. i'm going to read a longer fic you've written and comment on that.
2Queen of dawno.k short and to the point don't know what to say. i'm going to read a longer fic you've written and comment on that.