for Gifted Jealousy8/3/2004 c1 
74LordK
Wow. Very nice analysis. It wasn't the bset poem, as there were some meter problems, but I liked the message. Anyway, as I said, there were meter inconsistencies, but I liked the blank verse, and the style of the questions. The last two stanzas were some of my favorites. Nice start, but it could use a little more polish, I think... Still, nice expression of your ideas
74LordKWow. Very nice analysis. It wasn't the bset poem, as there were some meter problems, but I liked the message. Anyway, as I said, there were meter inconsistencies, but I liked the blank verse, and the style of the questions. The last two stanzas were some of my favorites. Nice start, but it could use a little more polish, I think... Still, nice expression of your ideas