
2/27/2013 c1 ellaybee
You have no idea how much I can relate to this. It's scary and frightening, but also comforting to know that I'm not alone. I am sorry you had to experience this; no one deserves to be treated as if they don't exist, especially not when they cared so much about the other. All that aside, good for you! Don't let anyone make you feel less important while you give your all to them.
You have no idea how much I can relate to this. It's scary and frightening, but also comforting to know that I'm not alone. I am sorry you had to experience this; no one deserves to be treated as if they don't exist, especially not when they cared so much about the other. All that aside, good for you! Don't let anyone make you feel less important while you give your all to them.
5/15/2006 c1
9Aluminum Tinkerbell
Powerful, raw, writing.
My sister went through the same thing. Odd. I guess it happens more than I guessed.

Powerful, raw, writing.
My sister went through the same thing. Odd. I guess it happens more than I guessed.
1/9/2006 c1
5Raeli Mercy
Whoa... I have a story going on by the same title that is completely different... This really hits home because my sisters having a similar problem. This is really good and has LOTs and lots of voice!
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Whoa... I have a story going on by the same title that is completely different... This really hits home because my sisters having a similar problem. This is really good and has LOTs and lots of voice!
FAVE AUTHOR AND STORIES LIST!
1/1/2005 c1
49SleepDontWeep
beautiful way to end!this whole thing just smothered in feelings that are usually too hard to describe but u done it brilliantly!i like that as u write it, its like you are figuring these things out in ur head piece by piece.like a warped diary entry... i dunno... im d one whos warped! anyways gud job! and keep up the amazing work!tanx for ur prettyful review and i apreciate ur honesty!and ill have a new chapter up soon for you!love always Gretchen45 x

beautiful way to end!this whole thing just smothered in feelings that are usually too hard to describe but u done it brilliantly!i like that as u write it, its like you are figuring these things out in ur head piece by piece.like a warped diary entry... i dunno... im d one whos warped! anyways gud job! and keep up the amazing work!tanx for ur prettyful review and i apreciate ur honesty!and ill have a new chapter up soon for you!love always Gretchen45 x
8/18/2004 c1
7T. Finky
"This time I'll stay away I promise." This is wonderful, I can identify with it so much. I have this problem, too. This 'friend' I had for 6 years... well, I was at a sleepover recently and I heard her saying to the others there she 'didn't know why she invited me because she doesn't even like me'. It was horrible, and I didn't tell anyone for ages because I was just so ashamed, I guess. But this captures my thoughts near-perfect.

"This time I'll stay away I promise." This is wonderful, I can identify with it so much. I have this problem, too. This 'friend' I had for 6 years... well, I was at a sleepover recently and I heard her saying to the others there she 'didn't know why she invited me because she doesn't even like me'. It was horrible, and I didn't tell anyone for ages because I was just so ashamed, I guess. But this captures my thoughts near-perfect.
8/3/2004 c1 donmike
wtf can I say in this review...uhh...nice check out my stuff or u will die a painful death
wtf can I say in this review...uhh...nice check out my stuff or u will die a painful death
7/24/2004 c1
32Stormy Daye
Very emotional. It was a good short story. I like how you explained what happened subtly instead of coming right out and saying it. Good job!

Very emotional. It was a good short story. I like how you explained what happened subtly instead of coming right out and saying it. Good job!
7/24/2004 c1
8Sky Inlucy
Yea-ah. This was great, I can totally relate to what you're trying to say. Very cool.

Yea-ah. This was great, I can totally relate to what you're trying to say. Very cool.