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2/5/2005 c1 270dustytiger
very well written, i have felt the same in the past, till i a friend killed himself... then i realised just how it effects those who are still left behind, great piece here, thank you for the review
1/30/2005 c1 264boy that you loved
very good, the emotion is brought across very effectively.

good poem.

'aptmyn, aptmyd, aptmyae, batditwwshfh'
12/13/2004 c1 53Lidless Eye
Not big on suicide poems, but I gotta comment on some word use. Netherworld, one I used before but never saw anybody else use. Kudos on that.

~Lidless Eye
7/25/2004 c1 132lucretiabaine
Wow...it makes a good and very true point. Death is amusing, is it not?
Good job =D

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