
8/31/2013 c26
10A Different Kind of Yellow
Hey Leena, still love this story after all this time! Had to go back now that someone is starting up a story just like it! Check my faves. See you on fb sometime! Kirsty xx

Hey Leena, still love this story after all this time! Had to go back now that someone is starting up a story just like it! Check my faves. See you on fb sometime! Kirsty xx
5/7/2012 c9 Alanisaur
I've been trying to read your story, because the concept sounds really awesome, but your format just sucks. There are no paragraphs, bad punctuation, & barely any spacing. Its too much for me to endure & i sadly have to say that i've given up on your story.
best of luck~
I've been trying to read your story, because the concept sounds really awesome, but your format just sucks. There are no paragraphs, bad punctuation, & barely any spacing. Its too much for me to endure & i sadly have to say that i've given up on your story.
best of luck~
2/17/2012 c3
2philosophyluver
I never thought I would meet another desi on here. Do you pride yourself on being a writer?

I never thought I would meet another desi on here. Do you pride yourself on being a writer?
12/17/2010 c9 XxXKBXxX
I think this story is really good but I found it hard to read, the writing was so crammed together. No offense but I think that you should rewrite the chapters like the first one with spaces and in paragraphs.^_^
I think this story is really good but I found it hard to read, the writing was so crammed together. No offense but I think that you should rewrite the chapters like the first one with spaces and in paragraphs.^_^
11/15/2010 c6 Funky-Socks
I just stopped trying to read this...Its hard to tell whos talking.
I would fix it up if I were you...just some constructive criticism for you.
I just stopped trying to read this...Its hard to tell whos talking.
I would fix it up if I were you...just some constructive criticism for you.
11/15/2010 c5 Funky-Socks
i think this wud be considerably better if you used the "enter button" every once in a while!...i cant read it like this
i think this wud be considerably better if you used the "enter button" every once in a while!...i cant read it like this
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