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8/31/2013 c26 10A Different Kind of Yellow
Hey Leena, still love this story after all this time! Had to go back now that someone is starting up a story just like it! Check my faves. See you on fb sometime! Kirsty xx
8/10/2012 c1 4Aphrodithe
I love it! I'm adding you to my community!
5/7/2012 c9 Alanisaur
I've been trying to read your story, because the concept sounds really awesome, but your format just sucks. There are no paragraphs, bad punctuation, & barely any spacing. Its too much for me to endure & i sadly have to say that i've given up on your story.

best of luck~
2/17/2012 c3 2philosophyluver
I never thought I would meet another desi on here. Do you pride yourself on being a writer?
4/23/2011 c26 Princess Mariana
Amazing!
1/7/2011 c26 dipintheriverstyx
I thought it was really good and cute.
12/17/2010 c10 XxXKBXxX
Yay! A chapter with spaces ^_^
12/17/2010 c9 XxXKBXxX
I think this story is really good but I found it hard to read, the writing was so crammed together. No offense but I think that you should rewrite the chapters like the first one with spaces and in paragraphs.^_^
11/15/2010 c6 Funky-Socks
I just stopped trying to read this...Its hard to tell whos talking.

I would fix it up if I were you...just some constructive criticism for you.
11/15/2010 c5 Funky-Socks
i think this wud be considerably better if you used the "enter button" every once in a while!...i cant read it like this
11/15/2010 c4 Funky-Socks
um...ok...ch 4 had a WAY too long paragraph...it was hard to read
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